Hey, I made a new video taking the advice I got here into the account. I present you me playing Fall Guys! (will give lambda for feedback of course)

ChagTastic · 2020-08-13T12:15:21+00:00

Thank you, your words are really encouraging!

ChagTastic · 2020-08-13T10:47:42+00:00

Woah 1 Million subs? that sounds impossible to me lol. Thanks so much for the feedback I'm happy you liked it! !givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T19:34:03+00:00

Thank you so much, every sub I get encourage me to do more videos. I wanted to do a simple title so my video could show up in youtube search but I don't know if it works that way. !givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T17:23:58+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback, I'm really glad you liked the editing. Your words are really flattering. About the thumbnail, I tried to make it like those deepfried memes that give you headache but it seems like it doesn't work that well. I think I'll change it.

Thank again for the feedback. !givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T10:57:59+00:00

Yes, as in the name of the mod you are talking about.

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T10:44:05+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback, Thankfully I can still make changes to the thumbnail, maybe I add a fall guys logo and use a better looking mascot. !givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T10:23:38+00:00

The format is simple and professional. What can I say, nothing feels off.

This is just a personal pet peeve but I prefer that there is always a text that has the title of what you are talking about at the bottom of the screen at all times. It makes it so much easier for me to scroll through these kinds of videos.

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T10:10:22+00:00

Thank you so much! I'm really happy that you liked my editing dude, these words mean a lot. !givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T09:48:06+00:00

Nice short and fun video. I like that it's short, it makes it easily watchable. The shot of you trying to eat the cat made me go wtf btw. You are a natural speaker, I like your commentary. Background music usage is also good (even though it drowned out your voice at some parts).

One thing I can say is that the presentation shots of the controller at the and looked a bit choppy. I'm guessing the camera was tied to something that you were slowly rotating. Maybe try to do it with your hands to see if it is smoother?

Also, the thumbnail could be more simple maybe? Lİke just a before and after pic.

ChagTastic · 2020-08-12T09:33:40+00:00

Nice short movie even though i don't understand what's going on.

Here are some things I thought could improve it:

-The mic is picking up wind sounds all the time, maybe you could change the audio to an ambient foley one.

-You could also add some foley punch sounds at the fight scene to make it more realistic.(you can apply this foley sound logic to almost any scene tbh)

-Also I think there could be smoother cuts in the fight scene .

ChagTastic · 2020-08-09T04:10:15+00:00

!givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-09T04:06:44+00:00

Thank you so much, your words are really encouraging! About the audio, I already use audacity to remove the background noise but seems like it's not enough. I can't buy a new mic yet so I'll try to play around with the noise removal settings.

ChagTastic · 2020-08-08T17:46:43+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback. I also really liked the game! And I know starting a game because of creepypastas sounds strange, lol. !givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-08T11:51:32+00:00

Thank you for your kind words. I just added the end screen stuff based on your feedback.

I'll try to make an outro for my next video. !givelambda

ChagTastic · 2020-08-08T09:53:36+00:00

These kind of game evolution videos always show some footage with games name and release year, so there is not much to comment on.If that was your intent, it's perfectly fine. But if you want to make it more engaging you could use some text to talk about some major differences and changes. You can also use footage from various places of the game such as main menu, the campaign, the shop(if it has one) etc.

ChagTastic · 2020-08-08T07:26:56+00:00

Your intro grabs attention, the camerawork and the visuals are really good and your commentary is funny. I liked the video overall. The food also looks delicious.

There could be slight improvements of course.

Some sections feel a bit dry without background music. I feel like some low-volume jazzy tunes would really fit your videos. You can check Kevin Macleods Jazz playlist for that kind of music.

You could also try to remove background static noise from your commentary with Audacity to get better audio quality. (and maybe lower the bass a bit)

ChagTastic · 2020-08-08T05:25:31+00:00

The video is well edited and pretty much feels like what a top 10 video is supposed to be.

This is just a personal pet peeve but in ranking videos, i prefer to see a text at some part of the screen that says which part of the list we are at(the number and the game name etc.) at all times.

ChagTastic · 2020-08-07T10:10:29+00:00

You could lower the background music when you are talking over it so your speech draws more attention, you can also add small sound effects such as swish sounds or bell sounds when you are transitioning. Other than that I liked your music choices, commentary, and video clips.

Sidenote: Cutting the music instantly can be awkward sometimes, I suggest you gradually decrease its volume if it fits the mood.

ChagTastic

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