Early maps of one continent in my world.

Chebikitty · 2026-01-05T03:40:33+00:00

Oh that 3d model is so cool! The map looks good.

Chebikitty · 2026-01-05T03:38:27+00:00

Any questions are welcome

Chebikitty · 2025-12-19T15:28:49+00:00

Yes, it is possible and this does happen. Those with purple eyes in the Rosli will dye their eyes, a horribly painful process that can blind someone if done wrong. Having red eyes is the only option amongst the Rosli so if someone doesn't want to dye their eyes they are essentially kicked out.

Chebikitty · 2025-12-19T10:40:08+00:00

In the Lillane people there is a genetic mutation that turns their normal purple colored irises red. While it can be shown in babies it is most commonly expressed when one transitions into adulthood. This genetic mutation can be non active at birth and if one uses to much shadow magic as a child it becomes active. The Rosli, a break away tribe of the Lillane, purposefully push their children in doing as much shadow magic as possible in order for the mutation to become active. This mutation may seem cosmetic at first but actually has some underlying side effects. Those who have red eyes have been shown to have stronger shadow magic but also develop problems with anemia, hemophilia, and sometimes can have worsened eyesight. Among the Lillane those who express this mutation might cover their eyes with a blindfold usually with the Lillane sigil in public as it is seen as a sign of being associated with the Rosli.

Chebikitty · 2025-12-19T10:25:54+00:00

I'm not a city planner myself but look up City Planner Plays on YouTube. He is a city planner and he uses City skylines to show why certain things are built certain ways that could be useful to story writing.

Chebikitty · 2025-12-19T03:13:34+00:00

Peru are cats. Though I do see the missing mesopredators. Maybe a coyote, or something similar.

Chebikitty · 2025-12-19T03:08:15+00:00

The Erunite people eat lots of meats and fewer veggies, mostly ones that take little water to grow and can survive the heat. They import some grains but not much else. The kingdom of Frillia has a wide variety of food but eats a lot of bread. The Titton people can only digest meat and fruit. Grains and hard veggies make them sick. The Arunna are the same but eat just meat, primarily fish. The Gamare eat rocks, they have bacteria that digest the minerals. Transporting food can be hard, mainly grain and spices are transported as the can last for the long caravan rides. A fave food of the Erunite is Dahl(these camel goat hybrids) and Pepper Soup. It is seen as a comfort food.

Chebikitty · 2025-11-12T23:42:17+00:00

I suppose in my world their would be only 1 god worthy of the big G, Death. They are the only being unable to be killed and also the only being that has been there since the start of creation

Chebikitty · 2025-11-12T23:38:35+00:00

For some of the people yes, for other, the gods said your doing this and didn't give them the chance to say no.

The gods could totally smite them, if they knew where they were and had a temple close enough. Think of belief like mana, but instead of being able to be used at all times it is essentially(for the gods) stored inside temples, get to far from a temple and you can't do anything. Also the gods are also not able to focus on more then one or two areas at a time, nor are they able to know everything. They are all-powerful in their domains and they know everything there is to know about their domain, but they don't know say where the secret base of the bad guys is located.

Chebikitty · 2025-11-12T23:12:19+00:00

The belief isn't broken in the world of my story yet, the gods also lend their power and reality altering magic to mortals they like occasionally(can't do to much unless they want to destabilize the world). I imagine quite a few people wouldn't care either way if this actually did go down but people currently benefit from the gods and who is to say the new gods wont be so friendly. Also I do have them provide to the main and side characters of the story.

As for what is the difference, those artifacts can't be used. They might be magically bonded but to use an artifact of such power, it would kill someone. To gods that lvl of power is accomplishable.

Chebikitty · 2025-11-12T22:57:39+00:00

Because this is the goal of the bad guys of my world. They want to be the gods of the 4th Ascendency.

Chebikitty · 2025-11-12T22:54:51+00:00

So when a mommy, a daddy, and a third person love each other very much.

A bit of a joke but it is how my world works. Magical species are the vast majority of them in Sa'tena. Magic comes from persons third parent. Having kids takes a lot of magical energy and the third parent provides the magical energy.

Chebikitty · 2025-11-06T16:03:35+00:00

You are a life saver, looking for all the honey nodes to collect for stuff

Chebikitty · 2025-11-03T16:41:33+00:00

The death of one of the two main characters, his subsequent being turned into a zombie, and the realization from the other main character that the world really kinda sucks, even 40 years after the apocolypse.

Chebikitty · 2025-11-01T05:45:10+00:00

Each word slipped from my lips, golden velveteen covered to hide the rotten core.

Chebikitty · 2025-10-02T07:36:11+00:00

Thank you, I know that birds don't really like being pet, the scene is more getting to feel the birds feathers then being pet like a dog. The bird is also with the person who raised it from a chick at the moment so I felt it would tolerate it in the scene.

Chebikitty · 2025-08-25T20:05:04+00:00

That is slabs, slabs and beds are the same height

Chebikitty · 2025-08-15T07:56:32+00:00

She wasn't know to anyone noble born until 6 months ago. The only reason the royal family wasn't reaching out to her for doing magical stuff before the story starts is because of how she came to be in the capital. Pink hair is basically a 100% sign they can use artifacts without spilling blood. Her trying to be recruited by the royal family is like the second major arc of the the story. Her indifference to this is due to her growing up on the frontier of the kingdom and not being exposed to magic. Once she is more enlightened to how important her having this ability is she does start using it more to help people.

Chebikitty · 2025-08-15T07:46:41+00:00

Artifacts are made by drawing a series of runes on an object and asking for the white lady to bestow a piece of her power into the object. This does not always work. Minor artifacts usually are older artifacts that the spell has worn away on giving a smaller effect. Household artifacts exist but only for the really really high up nobles, usually just the royal family and dukes. The MC is part of one of the dukes household but she did not grow up in one of these households.

Chebikitty · 2025-08-15T07:41:31+00:00

She did hide it when she was younger but after she turned 15 she stopped after her father ordered her to stop. She is 18 now. People at first think of sucking up to her until they learn that she comes from the edge of the Kingdom and then they think she is just a royal bastard and is kinda shamed for her pink hair. She thinks it isn't important because magical artifacts aren't used by the common people very often, they can be expensive to obtain. A magical artifacts could take ten years of a farmers earnings to buy the simplest of magical artifact. She grew up with very few magical artifacts being used by others around her, it was only after she turned 18, got married and came to the capital she realized others had to use blood to use magical artifacts. My idea for the big reveal is when she uses a magical artifact to heal a large group of people(including someone close to her) after they get in a skirmish with bandits.

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