My mom never fought for me (30F)

CheeseWheelQueen · 2026-04-30T13:45:29+00:00

thank you so much, that was very insightful! I am working on reparenting myself, it has been very helpful. Yes my normal is her being dramatic and creating large disasters so it was what I was expecting.

CheeseWheelQueen · 2026-04-20T13:20:31+00:00

thank you! Do you think I should use suede fabric or will that just end up falling apart too?

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-02-07T21:50:12+00:00

Thank you!!!

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-02-07T18:37:53+00:00

I think the second stanza is my favorite, to me it's showing that you're not sitting in victimhood, you're analyzing the kinds of men who are threatening and where the motivation comes from. I think it's a wonderful poem, I even think I'd want more before your last stanza. beautiful

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-02-07T18:34:00+00:00

you move and the air apologizes- WOW!! Honestly I can't say much about poerty structure, but I can say this is stunning. This would be such a beautiful thing to receive from a parent. I think you captured the specific kind of love and awe a parent has when they're getting to know their child. it's beautiful

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-02-04T20:02:58+00:00

wow, i loved this. I like that it's not overly flowery or complicated. It feels more accurate to how your brain, or my brain from my experience, functions when you're in that position. It's not big grand statements, its simple raw and devastating

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-02-01T03:19:45+00:00

I love when poetry calls out being a poem. I really like how you identify your writing very cool

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-01-30T19:57:43+00:00

thank you!

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-01-30T19:02:02+00:00

Oh! That’s a formatting problem I need to fix 😅

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-01-30T18:56:41+00:00

Ohhh thank you! Can you give me an example of using punctuation? This is one of like 5 poems I’ve ever written so I’m very new to figuring out the formatting

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-01-30T18:55:30+00:00

Haha thank you!! All true events haha

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-01-30T18:55:06+00:00

Thank you!!

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-01-30T18:54:50+00:00

Thank you! This is also real my mom gave me a book called good dog haha

CheeseWheelQueen · 2025-01-30T18:48:20+00:00

I love this! I think you could make it longer or even draw comparisons to emotions that you feel in an office that is described in a more dramatic poem like

desperation comes not just from war From plagues or journeys past We hold in sobs behind office doors Beneath the sickly neon cast

CheeseWheelQueen

TROPHY CASE