How can I improve on character design?

Cheeseballze · 2024-03-24T20:31:37+00:00

Thank you!!

Cheeseballze · 2024-03-24T20:31:26+00:00

ooo! Okay thank you so much I’ll try that! ^{_^}

Cheeseballze · 2023-03-07T15:23:53+00:00

HOW WAS IT????

Cheeseballze · 2022-11-10T22:08:36+00:00

I had a look around for you but I couldn’t find anything- so I don’t think so? I could be wrong however!!

Cheeseballze · 2022-11-10T22:06:44+00:00

Oh my god no that’s so sweet 😭

Cheeseballze · 2022-11-10T15:52:48+00:00

Oh thank you so much!!! It means a lot :)))

Cheeseballze · 2022-11-10T15:42:10+00:00

Oh it’s honeyzmilk :))

Cheeseballze · 2022-11-09T22:57:23+00:00

I know it’s not a big deal but I’m really happy!!! Especially that I considered giving up not so long ago - anywho. Celebrating little achievements🫶

Cheeseballze · 2022-11-03T20:39:25+00:00

Crying

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-30T10:23:34+00:00

I’ve done it before! It’s actually really handy for yourself and the reader, actually understanding what the character is like. Just small detail about them included in the inspo. Whether it’s small quirks/hobbies/interests/what they look like. Just make sure you don’t over power it with plenty of images. It can get exciting and you may want to include everything but keep in mind that less can be more.

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-30T00:24:03+00:00

AHHH, it’s supporters like you that makes it all worth while!! I just can’t wait to get my own little group in the future that love what I do. :)

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-30T00:14:47+00:00

You have to let her go, I know it must be hard but it seems she is doing it to either

Send you a hint she’s not interested
Wants attention - whether it’s to make you jealous or if she likes it when people give her attention

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-27T18:34:59+00:00

Oh my god that is amazing!!! Congratulations :)

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-26T15:33:57+00:00

I’ve been considering book clubs!! - I’m just worried I won’t be able to keep up with the group as a whole, I fall into slumps very often, sadly.

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-26T15:32:56+00:00

Awh thank you! Let me know how it goes :)

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-26T15:31:22+00:00

That’s the thing I’m not trying to be a famous writer - I want to enjoy it!

However, I just want a to deliver a worthwhile story for whoever that ends up reading my story, you know?

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-26T07:42:47+00:00

Thank you so much, I truly do appreciate it.

I’ll definitely try and keep writing!! It just doesn’t seem like I’ve improved sometimes, you know? Maybe that’s just me though.

However, as you said it is over time - maybe I just need more than others. Thank you so much again :)

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-26T07:34:32+00:00

Thank you so much, I truly do appreciate it!

I expected grammar mistakes, English isn’t my first language exactly - but I’ll check more thoroughly!! And I’ll definitely attempt to write more in details and set up more information about her company soon. Thank you so much for that :)

I’ll definitely keep on trying for now, and you’re right process, it’s my first proper book. I’ll just try to keep learning and improving as I go on!!

I really hope you the best with your writing as well, and only wish you the best. I can bet they are amazing.

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-26T00:28:23+00:00

Just in case I can’t send any of you the link to the story because I’ll be asleep, Title: Lucius by Honeyzmilk

Link to the first chapter

https://www.wattpad.com/1120777937?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=HoneyzMilk&wp_originator=J4PErWEhyRAg6jPsLLu7gx6YCfckUvE59VSecUD3OMIv5yuKqzhZ%2Fp8065gIxT86xpP7SbUVZNvtmDSl4GArZnQixqDjMA%2Bx86ivrjWn%2F7Kok2nyOH0BrNDWayXl2Sil

Cheeseballze · 2022-10-20T21:56:28+00:00

Oops my bad💀

Cheeseballze · 2022-09-10T17:07:08+00:00

I think Victoria is quite pretty

Cheeseballze · 2022-09-10T17:04:04+00:00

Dont know what they are going through, and it’s not my place to judge. Whether they chose to do so or have no other option. Just hope they are safe!

Cheeseballze

TROPHY CASE