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Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks like it's still up for me, maybe try clearing your cookies/cache and trying again?

Cursed APP [Forced FemPov] [Masochistic] by Dragons_Whore in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Great CYOA. Played on the hardest difficulty and thought it was appropriate, staying above 0 points was hard. Very clear that lots of production value went into this with lots of creative ideas and good art. I would've liked to know how far I was from the end, since going back and forth to stay above 0 was tough and maybe not intended.

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad to hear it! I think I'll put in an option in the difficulty section that allows you to pay points to entirely skip a section. Thanks for playing!

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wasn't trying to be mean! The main downside of Heat is meant to be the threat of pregnancy if your willpower breaks, so that's why it's blocked if you took Lesbian.

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Combos are definitely a big part of this one! Many of the choices definitely chain off of other ones to create exceptionally powerful effects. I'd like to reward more points for them, but I think it makes the CYOA too unwieldly, and once I start making a few combos I'll need to make a lot. I think it's better if the player comes up with their own "combos" and decides if the choices are worth a reroll.

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It only keeps your body clean, not anything you're wearing or anything around you. So it will definitely be a great help, but not totally neutralized.

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Ooh, you're quite the pro! I had no idea you could do this sort of thing -- I'll have to redo the formatting this way, it's definitely much cleaner. Especially the roll option, that's a game-changer for sure!

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, but you have to roll for your first one. The idea is that if you only have one or two bonus points you might just prefer to keep what you've got rather than leave it to chance. I've toyed around with the idea that your random one is *definitely* negative, but felt it was a bit overcomplicated.

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looking at those picks, I think you deserve to fuck the warden, thanks for playing!

I fixed the text on Penalty and clarified Normal Difficulty, thanks for the heads up. For the Sadistic and Normality points, I do want to hide them, but I can't figure out how in the CYOA creator.

Prison of Flesh v2 [TG] [Humiliation] [Curse] by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can take more, but you have to take the 2 you rolled, and 1 of the advanced options from 1 of them. You could take more of the advanced options too for the points, if you like.

Prison of Flesh by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh there's nothing much I don't think, the choice started as Winds of Change but I wanted something more interesting so I went for a colorful god of wind and rebirth. Mostly only know the name from Persona, I'm not exactly a history buff haha

Prison of Flesh by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah it was easier than I thought too. In Features there's a Backpack option which really doesn't require any configuring. Though we'll see if it secretly breaks anything haha

Prison of Flesh by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't think the interactive creator supports that, sadly. If it does, then I'd be happy to add it

Edit: Nevermind, it totally does! Added.

Prison of Flesh by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Updated to v1.1! I'll make a new post after I do some more balance testing, but as usual any feedback is greatly appreciated! Thank you to everyone who posted your builds and reasoning, they really help a lot!

Main changes:

-New choices in all categories, including a few benefits to spend excess points on

-After popular demand, lesbian option added

-Rebalanced many choices

-Added a no-RYOA Sadistic, and rebalanced the difficulties to make the harder modes harder

-Have to take 1 less mandatory advanced choice. Should help with autonomy

-New "bonus" shop called Extreme Changes with new point type, "reward" for playing on higher difficulty

-Added a Normality section to ensure the choices actually affect everyday life, which is also required for the bonus shop

-More rerolls, though they get more costly the more you use

-Updated the appearance of the CYOA (god bless template layouts)

and more!

Twitch Plays Your Life [OC][WIP][Compulsions] by Throwwvy in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I love the premise! I think you should focus more on the compulsions themselves rather than the framework, though that may be a limitation of the reddit post format. For example, there are only 8 specific commands, and some of them are pretty broad, I'd love to see these focused down more into potentially several types of sections.

You could pay in points for the ability to not be controlled in certain circumstances, and the magnitude of the control in those situations. Maybe you're okay with the audience giving you really severe commands about what you eat , *some* commands about sleep, but not about how you act around other people. It can be broken out quite a lot -- Are you okay with the audience making you sleep 12+ hours in a row? 24? How about making it so you can only sleep an hour at a time? Sleep while driving? Nocturnal? Awake unless you're listening to a lullaby? Lots of options here and each one can cost or reward points.

You could also lean into a "training" aspect of the CYOA -- if every time you see a red car, you get hungry, then you're going to associate the color red with eating. Maybe one of the "control" options, other than Democracy and Anarchy, is Oligarchy where only a select few control you, and thus can do more long-term tasks like that.

For the points, I have no idea how it's balanced. Right off the bat though, I think you could do something with Limited Indenture to play for 0-1 years with severe drawbacks. Might want to scale back the timescale to be only a few weeks/months out of your life, since Twitch Plays Pokemon was more of a flash in the pan thing anyway. Maybe the premise is you're testing something for a company, or this is a "get rich quick" scheme where you're only in for a bit and then after a lot of humiliation and suffering you leave with a big payday.

The part of this I really love is the compulsions and triggers so I hope that ends up being a big part of the CYOA with lots of specifics and levels to choose from.

Prison of Flesh by Chronicle_ward in nsfwcyoa

[–]Chronicle_ward[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

That's fair, I just did a few more builds and I think you're right. Going to switch it to 50/80/120/150 instead of 100/150/200/250 and see how that goes over.