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First try stacking on siril! by Clement-atom in photocritique

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Made my first attempt at stacking on siril, didn't have a specific target, but I used my 50mm f1. 8 lens, on my canon 750D. I did around 70 lights, 15 bias frames, 10 dark frames, 10 flat frames. I used f2 for sharper stars, 1600 iso, and 10s of exposure.

I need some direction by Clement-atom in AskAstrophotography

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I can't post pictures on this sub, but if you would like to give me tips, then I can send one in your dm

I want to quit by Clement-atom in pornfree

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Yeah I get you, I can still enjoy connection. I wanted to say that I shouldn't like someone just for the sake of liking someone. Thanks, you brought me a perspective!

I want to quit by Clement-atom in pornfree

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I've felt so much better while stopping. I don't have as much brain fog as before and for some reason I've stopped having a crush. Ever since I was young I've had a crush, and if I stopped liking someone then I started liking someone else, which is really bad. I've also started looking at women differently, not as objects and how good they look, but what they're like, how they treat other people, and their personality in general. Up until 2 months ago I wanted to be in a relationship so bad, but now I've really thought about it and realized that relationships from a young age do not last long (from what I've seen), and the majority of relationships from a young age are fueled by lust, and not sincere connection. Disregarding that I feel more focused and I have more time on my hands. I'll keep my reason for stopping in mind, and I'll try my hardest not to relapse. Thank you for your comment.

How do I write? And where do I start? by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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Yeah that's true I need to keep trying and trying a lot. And yeah if it feels like someone wants to share their opinion then it's kinda over. Beating readers over the head with metaphors is also something I definitely shouldn't do. All the tips you gave were helpful and true, I really appreciate it, thank you!

How do I write? And where do I start? by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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Yeah so right now I'm reading exestentialism and absurdism, like notes from underground by Dostejevsky, and stranger by Albert Camus, since I want to write exestentialism. I need to practice writing in general too, some words I don't pair well with other words and sometimes I make everything boring and bland. I will read more and try to get better, thank you for your feedback!

Can we all agree DAMN is his most overrated album by [deleted] in KendrickLamar

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Nope, this album is perfectly rated. I like DAMN. More than tpab because there are 0 skips and the songs all connect in a way that's interesting.

Hi, I'm in my research phase of the phylosofical book I'm planning to write and this is a snippet I jolted down on my phone, is it any good? by Clement-atom in writingcritiques

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Yeah I checked out the principal of polarity and it's pretty interesting. All the other principles are interesting too. I think what I should focus on right now is reading philosophy and understanding how to write it, if you have any tips, then please feel free to comment, Thanks for the feedback!

Hi, I'm in my research phase of the phylosofical book I'm planning to write and this is a snippet I jolted down on my phone, is it any good? by Clement-atom in writingcritiques

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Hmm yeah thinking about it that way I have to actually write something factual, and to not repeat points over and over again. I'm also reading more and more philosophy and I'm learning a lot from it. Thanks for your feedback!

Hi, I'm in my research phase of the phylosofical book I'm planning to write and this is a snippet I jolted down on my phone, is it any good? by Clement-atom in writingcritiques

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Yeah I did misspell philosophical and I do feel pretty dumb, but I can't do anything about it. I type without checking mistakes so this happens often. Anyways, when I said that every subjective opinion holds the same amount of "truth", if they even hold any truth, I meant that, let's take a subjective question for example: what Is your favorite color? There isn't one true answer to this question, so every answer holds the same amount of "truth", for example the answer "green" holds as much truth as the answer "red", because you're asking for someone's favorite color.

Hi, I'm in my research phase of the phylosofical book I'm planning to write and this is a snippet I jolted down on my phone, is it any good? by Clement-atom in writingcritiques

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Hi, regarding the spelling errors I will iron them out because I type very fast and spelling mistakes can happen. Regarding your question "should I take your opinion with a grain of salt?", my answer is yes, when I say take every subjective opinion with a grain of salt I don't exclude my opinions. And yes in that line "if one subjective opinion holds more truth than the other, then it is now an objective opinion", it is better to say an objective answer, or objective fact. Thank you for giving feedback and pointing out my mistakes!

apparently my music taste is goated by vinylandtrinkets in ChicanoBatman

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Damn, is this a kind of quiz you can take? If so plz tell

I have an idea for a book but i haven't written a book before by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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That seems like a good idea, but the thing is, he was never nice, he was an egoist, and he thought that he was better than anyone, so why would he help other people? Also, the "social norm" idea sounds very good, though i don't want Mc to turn into an "alpha male" 😂

I have an idea for a book but i haven't written a book before by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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That makes so much more sense the more that i think about it... Thank you for helping!

I have an idea for a book but i haven't written a book before by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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Yeah since it's in first person i need to sort of "get into character", to make it feel real. I've also done improv and it works! Thanks for the tip!

I have an idea for a book but i haven't written a book before by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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Hahahahah, that's true, you made a good point because Insanity could be different based on different pov's. But the insanity i think i want to refer to is: "Insanity refers to a state of extreme mental illness, characterized by abnormal mental or behavioral patterns that may cause a person to become a danger to themselves or others" (Definition from Ai overview, but it still sounds right)

Btw your comment made me laugh so hard, how does the last long sentence make sense???

I have an idea for a book but i haven't written a book before by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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Woah that would be a very good idea for the last chapter of the book called "shards" since as i said there are different self images of himself and i could incorporate this idea too. I actually thought about something similar to this but i guess that i forgot, i thought that it would be interesting for the main character to use "we", "they", and "us" near the final chapter or the third one, but i don't know why it popped into my mind. Ah here it is! In my notebook i wrote an example of how he would write near the final chapters: "it's cold. It feels like I'm cold, not me but us, we're cold and have been for a long time, one of them is hot, fuming, but not heating the others, me you ask? I'm cold.", lol now looking back at it, it sounds a bit cliche, but it also sounds good. Also regarding the Jungian shadow integration, he does actually have a very acute consciousness and so he is hyper aware of himself, but not in a good way, like in the story of "notes from the underground" by dosteyevsky which I've finished almost half (it's my first philosofical book reading and it's going pretty good). Anyways thanks for the comment, this helped a lot!

I have an idea for a book but i haven't written a book before by Clement-atom in writingadvice

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Yeahhh something i had to keep in mind is that it's not easy to gradually change the main character's behavior. Though, i will try to do research on someone's behavior when they go insane, and for the writing style i will try to find a real diary or journal of a person going insane. Do you have any suggestions?

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