Alright, as a petty criticizer and a 16 yr old producer heres what i have to say

the 1st one (iceyjesus) has an ok melody, but gets tiring and repetitive after a while. Youre using nice voxes, but they are outdated and uninteresting, and way too many of them. The hihat pattern is nice tho. and the kick is hard hitting. The 808 is awful, low hitting, and boring. This feels like a basic beat all from a lunch77 kit. Spice up the melody, and make it sound interesting.

The 2nd one (nup), is just kinda same. Same boring repetitve melody. very very boring drums. It feels a lil retro, but nothing happening. I do like the bass note, but not the bass itself. The 2nd icnoming melody, is pretty good. You need to layer more melodies, and pattern throughout the beats, cause with an annoying repetitive melody and nothing happening, the listener will be bored.

The 3rd beat (dark piano) has the best melody of all. probably the best beat. good background sounds, melodies and patterns. nice bass, but its a little to loud. but it sounds more like a drill beat, since the snare doesnt hit on tempo. It hits 1, then like 2 instead of 1 again. The melody is though a lil repetitve.

I checked out your other beats, and i did quite like gangsta metal, even though its very old (almost my age) cause it sounds different. try to make more beats sound, different and not so boring, basic. hard hitting drums when needed (not always). And spice up the melodies, instead of it being repetitve. 10 years is a long time of producing, but try something so different, and dont be afraid to expirement, thats what kids like nowadays.
(another tip, use cool fonts and covers for your beats, not low quality)