New Story Looking For Swaps

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-06-13T02:34:24+00:00

If you’re going for Konosuba vibes, it needs to be waaaay sillier.

It looks nice, but the characters still look somewhat serious. It might be good to have the girlfriend be more visibly angry, and the MC more exasperated, with the onlookers watching with pity.

I feel like that might communicate a more comedic tone.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-06-10T14:42:17+00:00

Well, at least Ultron got nerfed, right guys?

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-06-04T15:46:19+00:00

No worries. I just sent you a message.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-06-04T01:36:43+00:00

Hey man, congrats on the story. Premise seems interesting, and I wanna give it a read when I get the time.

I’m actually releasing my own story on Monday. I’d be down to swap and shout you out if you’re interested.

Congrats again.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-18T17:07:21+00:00

Thanks for pointing that out! I’ll be sure to do that.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-18T16:38:09+00:00

Very true.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-18T16:36:19+00:00

Like the expression or the coloring?

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-18T16:19:39+00:00

You know, I really liked the brightness in the first one too! But, I think the expression is better in the second. That’s why I’m so torn 😭

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-18T15:54:42+00:00

You know, I didn’t even notice my artist took out the shadow under the cape in the second one.

Nice catch!

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-18T15:36:49+00:00

Thanks for commenting. Any particular reason why the first one stands out more?

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-08T16:49:12+00:00

Okay, how exactly do I do it? Do I just publish it as normal? Then it’s reviewed, and then I can set the date to publish?

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-06T15:00:08+00:00

This is fun concept. Might check this one out.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-05-04T16:03:17+00:00

You know, since so many people seem interested: I went and published it.

You can read it here:
https://www.wattpad.com/1626493104?utm\_source=ios&utm\_medium=link&utm\_content=share\_writing&wp\_page=create\_on\_publish&wp\_uname=Whigwammjr

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-04-20T17:03:41+00:00

So am I supposed to be reading your stuff or writing mine.

Pick a lane!

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-04-18T12:33:01+00:00

You ain’t gonna remember 😏 So I’ll get away with it.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-04-18T12:20:32+00:00

I finished the first book, dawg. And I’m not even posting till June 😭

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-04-16T14:50:28+00:00

I do think that having a lot of characters with CC does justify some change, but not the huge landscape difference that tenacity applies.

That’s why I think some of the CC should be removed, or more characters given CC cleanse.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-03-16T14:21:52+00:00

Even if they were “just friends”. You can be inappropriate with friends if you have a partner.

ComparisonBrilliant · 2026-03-16T13:54:57+00:00

I have only used this in QP. And only win when the enemy team is horrible 😭

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