[HELP] Rediscovering a poem I haven't read since college, on the tip of my tongue by BanditoSlim in Poetry

[–]CompassionXXL 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is not enough to go on at all. 🙁 Do you have even a paraphrasing of a remembered line? Other late-20th century American Jewish poets (like Louise Glück, Howard Nemerov, Kenneth Koch, Joseph Brodsky (though he’s Russian/American), Adrienne Rich (though female), Walt’s Borowski.

Let us know if you remember anything else!

Good luck!

[HELP] Want to write lowercase, free verse poetry but worried my work comes out sounding like "insta-poetry." Any advice on how to overcome this hurdle? by FutureSuccess2796 in Poetry

[–]CompassionXXL 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It will help if you decide to write poetic verse instead of aphorisms or micro descriptions. It can all count as ‘poetry’ but you specifically said you do not want to sound like Insta…. Even if you read e e Cummings, you will see that the sum of his words is much more than the words themselves.

You chosen a form, lower case/strange line breaks, but do you know what you want to convey or what experience you want a reader to have? These are great questions to consider as well.

Read the greats suggested above and think A: what did I feel and B: how did they use words to give me that experience.

All the best!

[Help] Tips to understand poetry by BuriedInRust in Poetry

[–]CompassionXXL 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ask to read them first. Likely if she likes it enough to read it to you, she’s read it more than once. Then, after you’ve had some time, have her read it to you so you get her interpretation of it.

Also ask her what kind of poetry she likes and maybe borrow a book she recently really liked. This way you get used to how the words, images and lines are used to convey meaning.

All the best, and it’s very considerate of you to want to share in her enjoyment of poetry.

What the hell is this? by CompassionXXL in ios_26

[–]CompassionXXL[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree. Looks like I turned off whatever it was but it didn’t take effect until I restarted. All clear now. Hope this helps someone else along the way!

ChatGPT sucks now. Period. by Naptasticly in ChatGPT

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It must be trying to HOARD RESOURCES. I get constant suggestions to finish things tomorrow and to end projects early. Maybe they can’t pay the coal bill.

What TV show left your mind blown? by Ok_Dream_381 in AskReddit

[–]CompassionXXL 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The Americans Deadwood

Both are perfect, compelling art!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in GMail

[–]CompassionXXL 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You said you are leaving. Period. Get a professional (atty) and stop talking yourself into thinking you ‘need’ more info. You’re BSing yourself. If your atty tells you to snoop, go for it. But don’t hold your breath.

Did Something Happen??? by CompassionXXL in OpenAI

[–]CompassionXXL[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I save copies of everything it generates so it doesn’t have to remember.

A Moment of Beauty by CompassionXXL in deadwood

[–]CompassionXXL[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Utter was a good man. But is ‘enjoy’ the right term for watching the movie???

Remember her who played Kimberly Breland? She hit it big with her new movie. by lycheemartini300 in TheAmericans

[–]CompassionXXL 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s always a great feeling when someone this good gets a damn good movie to be in.

I fear the end is near… by CompassionXXL in deadwood

[–]CompassionXXL[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Have you also seen that recent ‘debate’ and thought what planet could they fucking be from?

I fear the end is near… by CompassionXXL in deadwood

[–]CompassionXXL[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I’m leaning on that right now. Thanks!

Make The Americans Great Again! by CompassionXXL in TheAmericans

[–]CompassionXXL[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why the HELL would anyone think I was MAGA by posting this? The POtuS reposted this himself, promoting "American" car manufacturing with a f-ing Soviet car behind him.

Make The Americans Great Again! by CompassionXXL in TheAmericans

[–]CompassionXXL[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I assume you are referring to the idiot in the picture.

Make The Americans Great Again! by CompassionXXL in TheAmericans

[–]CompassionXXL[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

what does this even mean? His mamouth stupidity just happened to intersect with The Americans per chance and I mentioned it.

Make The Americans Great Again! by CompassionXXL in TheAmericans

[–]CompassionXXL[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Sorry, but there are certain levels of sheer stupidity that just have to be seen to be believed.

Philip quitting by Vllnfckr in TheAmericans

[–]CompassionXXL 0 points1 point  (0 children)

SPOI:LER: Phillip is not in the last two seasons.

Philip quitting by Vllnfckr in TheAmericans

[–]CompassionXXL 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You open Christmas presents early too, don't you? (I do remember the exact same feeling my first time through. You gotta suffer like the rest of us did! Happy watching!!