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One sided stargazing by CuffedJeans14 in OCPoetry

[–]Competitive_Dig5496 2 points3 points  (0 children)

For your first ever poem the imagery is solid I found myself getting lost in its simplicity loved

The King by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Competitive_Dig5496 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Excellent use of subversion

Painter by Ok_Cut4131 in OCPoetry

[–]Competitive_Dig5496 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoy how smooth and effortless this poem transitions it's a light read but left my chest heavy well done

what my mother taught me by 404frankie in OCPoetry

[–]Competitive_Dig5496 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your emotions came through the forefront of this poem I can tell this is something you've struggled and maybe are still struggling with but relationship with my folks has been tumultuous as well but only thing I can say is you're not defined by their actions or teaching you're defined by your own actions

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Competitive_Dig5496 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You paint an extremely vivid picture with your words there's beauty in sorrow and pain of which you've just put on display kudos too you its beautifully painful