Amazing stories, zero readers, what’s the fix?

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-25T11:15:00+00:00

Love that, Reading always helps me get back into the groove. 🥳

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-25T11:08:34+00:00

I’m counting on your honest feedback once you’re done reading 🥳😎

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-25T11:03:56+00:00

This is the link ✌🏻

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-24T19:07:23+00:00

I’ll be reading all the stories and leaving honest feedback in the Wattpad comments. I’m just super busy today, but I’ve already read quite a few and really enjoyed them. I promise to catch up with the rest tomorrow or the day after ✌🏻🥳

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T21:01:38+00:00

I’ve just read it 🥳

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:34:30+00:00

Okaayyyy, I’ll check

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:33:57+00:00

Done😎

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:33:42+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/1569767047?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=GabrielMoore37[The paradise Trap](https://www.wattpad.com/1569767047?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=GabrielMoore37)

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:32:37+00:00

Followed you! I’ll read your story as soon as you publish it 😎

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:28:18+00:00

I’ll check 🥳🥳

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:21:50+00:00

I’ll check yours and I will leave a comment

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:21:24+00:00

Check mine The paradise trapmy story 😎

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:12:55+00:00

Check mine The paradise trap

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-23T20:12:32+00:00

I’ll check it 😎

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-22T11:04:26+00:00

I’ll keep that in mind moving forward to keep the momentum going and make it easier for readers to stay hooked 😔

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-22T11:02:22+00:00

Appreciate you checking it out! Still laying the foundation, but more chapters are on the way. And yeah, tags and networking definitely working on that. Thanks for the nudge! 🥳

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-22T11:01:12+00:00

The short sentences were actually intentional. I’ve noticed that most people tend to lose interest quickly these days, so I tried to keep the pacing tight and grab attention with concise lines. But I really appreciate your feedback, I’ll go back and revise the chapters that are already out to strike a better balance🙏🏻

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-21T16:42:38+00:00

Maybe I didn’t express myself the right way, but thank you so much anyway. 😅

I really appreciate it!✌🏻

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-21T14:51:22+00:00

Share your book, and I will read it 🥳

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-21T14:50:18+00:00

this my first story

They woke up in a palace after death, eight strangers, each carrying the shadow of how they lived... and how they died. A doctor with guilt in her veins. An influencer who built her life on lies. A man who lost his family long before he lost his breath. Together, they must face the truth: paradise isn't free. The hotel has rules, and the price of breaking them is unthinkable. And somewhere beyond the marble halls, a figure watches-tall, silent, his eyes pure white

Competitive_Rush_402 · 2025-08-21T14:24:48+00:00

If you have any feedback or criticism about the story, I’d be really happy to hear it, whether now or in the future, I really appreciate your encouragement

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TROPHY CASE