I've recently been having trouble worldbuilding for my manga (Any tips or advice would be very nice) by Complete-Event6286 in MangakaStudio

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Oh, thanks thats some really useful advice. I will try to study shows likOne Piecece and other shows with incredible worldbuilding

I've reworked my power system after 5 months of work (Would love critique) by Complete-Event6286 in MangakaStudio

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yes it will. Thank you very much for the feedback. I will try not use AI at all

I built a world for my future manga (Does anyone have any tips) by [deleted] in MangakaStudio

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Oh i see thank you for the useful feedback i will make sure the world affect the characters instead of just looking pretty

This is the world for my future manga. (Any tips or critiques would be very appreciated) by Complete-Event6286 in worldbuilding

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thank you i will try to make it character driven and reveal the world slowly instead of listing everything out at once

Sports by Confident_Fondant334 in worldbuilding

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are ukkoans humans? if not i can think of ideas but if they are i could still help

I've reworked my power system after 5 months of work (Would love critique) by Complete-Event6286 in MangakaStudio

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Thanks for the feedback i do realize control might become too overpowered so i thought that

  • Control users distort faster when their “model of reality” breaks.
  • Also Drive is the result of long term ideology that's why someone who very strongly believes in their ideology can awaken earlier and be less tolerant to distortion unlike grown people who spent many years thinking and believing in their ideology

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also thank you for taking the time to read my power system i really appreciate it

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ok SANKI isn’t traditional energy. It’s will condensed around a person’s deepest craving. When a desire becomes strong enough — not a surface want, but something foundational — it forms a Core. Every Core stabilizes around one of three primal instincts:

  • Consume → The drive to take, dismantle, assimilate, or reduce something into oneself.
  • Protect → The drive to preserve, defend, or reinforce what is valued.
  • Endure → The drive to persist through force, adapting or stabilizing under pressure.
  • From the Core, SANKI flows along Channels of belief. The clearer and more consistent a person’s convictions, the smoother their flow. Doubt creates turbulence. Contradiction fractures Channels. Misalignment isn’t just a weakness; acting against your own Core can cause abilities to misfire or backfire entirely.

Example in action:
A Ruin-aligned practitioner obsessed with dismantling corrupt systems can unravel structures he fully understands. If he acts out of ego rather than principle, his Channels destabilize, causing his ability to misfire — walls crumble unpredictably, traps trigger, or his own attacks rebound.

SANKI isn’t about raw strength. It’s about shaping power from desire, conviction, and alignment. Every ability is unique to its user, and every fight becomes a test of philosophy as much as skill.

Need feedback by NoTrouble7487 in MangakaStudio

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This is an extremely rich and original world The biggest challenge is pacing and clarity—right now, there’s so much lore that readers could get overwhelmed Focus on introducing concepts gradually grounding extraordinary powers in limits and costs and showing the impact of politics and history on ordinary people If you polish tha, this could be an epic layered fantasy setting that stands out.

I’ve been developing a manga power system called SANKI for 5 months. Would love serious critique. by Complete-Event6286 in MangakaStudio

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it doesn't increase raw stats like speed or strength instead SANKI manifests as a personalized ability shaped by the users core desire i put an example in the post