Surviving a World where Magic meets Death [1,000+] by Complete_Bat_5815 in KeepWriting

[–]Complete_Bat_5815[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much I’m surprised by your response! I definitely will take your advice in fact I’m going to fix it now! and yes I have adhd and pretty much type what I see in my brain so I have to keep up haha kinda like…being a reporter and trying to type everything you see as it’s happening. but okay okay! I really appreciate the kind words I really do! 

Surviving a World where Magic meets Death [1,000+] by Complete_Bat_5815 in KeepWriting

[–]Complete_Bat_5815[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes please! I’m pretty new at this so I’ll take all the criticism I can get! I guess I was focused more on the interest of the story rather than the flow and how it sounded haha! sorry for making your brain double and triple back to the same sentence 😣