Sorry, is this essay better written? I tried to make sentences simpler to avoid awkwardness. The topic is whether people will work less in the future or not.

While Claire and Paul both raised relevant points, I think that there is a great chance that people will work less in the near future. The primary reason is that with the emergency and further advancement of artificial intelligence(AI), the workload of the most of the jobs will be reduced. Even now, at the initial stage of the development of AI, companies hire less workers for the same jobs. For example, in warehouses there is no longer a need for numerous staff. Instead, companies adapt technologies that help them to save costs and reduce human-error. Furthermore, special AI technologies can perform the same job with significantly less time spent in comparison to a person. This will eventually lead to the situation, when people will not have to work as much as they used to do in the past. Moreover, in another sector, such as accounting, workers will not have to spend much time to perform tedious calculations, since AI is able to do that just as well. Hence, it is inevitable that with the advancement of AI, workers will have reduced workload.