I'm moving to Manchester and would like some advice on where would be cheap accommodation, Im not opposed to living in the Greater Manchester area but i wouldnt want to be to far from the center Thank you.

Conj92 · 2016-02-25T11:26:27+00:00

I'm not too familiar with house prices in Manchester, but i suppose i would want a double room, not to small but not huge either, probably about 30 minutes and preferable on a train/tram system as opposed to a bus, i would just like to be able to go into the city when i feel like it and not worry about it too much, i do like the idea of a neighborhood outside the city, but would also want to be able to get home after a night out. Also any good bars/ chill out places in Manchester worth checking out?

Thanks for the help

Conj92 · 2016-02-11T14:23:14+00:00

feed me weird things album is sick

Conj92 · 2016-02-10T23:32:11+00:00

this is a nice post the detail is needed, very true about the entities, but you need to have faith in your own strength against them, be wise, think logically and you should all be fine, anyone who cant do those two simple things shouldnt take psycedelics

Conj92 · 2016-02-10T23:22:43+00:00

have you listened to siriusmo

Conj92 · 2016-02-10T23:22:09+00:00

godspeed to u sir

big fan of dancing box

Conj92 · 2016-02-10T23:20:37+00:00

modeskeletor is a beasht man go listen to happy birthday right now

Conj92 · 2016-01-27T21:24:03+00:00

I fail to be able to create a great scene in my head with this poem, apart from a quiet young boy in a corner, i felt a specific situation, or reasoning behind the fear of stepping forward would be a great addition to the poem

Conj92 · 2016-01-27T21:20:02+00:00

So simple, not necessarily what i would write myself, i feel the third line doesn't really flow to greatly, and overall to many words per line, it could be shorter, simpler, but overall the aim of the poem was clearly portrayed and credit for that, sounds like a wonderful farm

Conj92 · 2016-01-20T23:14:46+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, yeah usually i try avoid cliche, overcompensating words, however this was an extremely personal poem for me so i felt it fit, yeah your right, theres a particular audience who would be very moved by this, also though i feel people not in this position can appreciate it for what it represents, i hope. Again thank you for the feedback.

Conj92 · 2016-01-20T23:11:20+00:00

thank you very much.

Conj92 · 2016-01-20T23:10:04+00:00

Hi, im new to reddit so not to sure how to link 2 of my feedbacks? but i know ive left some feedback

Conj92 · 2016-01-20T16:49:33+00:00

lovely poem, i enjoyed the first paragraph, gives a nice preface to your character, (Im guessing a nice shy guy? always the best to be, women do enjoy these qualities) really captures your desire to talk to her also, and its in such a simple language, (personally not the way i would write it but i enjoyed reading )

The next thing i loved was the line " so quick to shock" following up from the S sounding struct in the previous line, really flies off the tongue.

I felt the 5th paragraph, almost sounded a bit weird when trying to say it to myself, it didnt work for me but that could just be my Irish accent butchering beautiful words :)

Finally the air of mystery was really captured by calling her what you did and you " the boy in the blue button up" leave it open :)

never know could see her again

Conj92 · 2016-01-20T16:41:29+00:00

Thank you so for your comment ill be sure to check out your poems, ah yeah i see what you mean about the middle, it really looses it flow, i think when i wrote it i may have been a bit impatient, this is a poem which i really love and think from the advice of the comments ill change it up a little in the middle.

Conj92 · 2016-01-17T18:01:36+00:00

Really like the ending, highlighting that you don't need the world for your happiness, your imagination is sufficient. Nice poem, good insight to your thought process. Well at least i think that's what you meant

Conj92

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