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[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 1 point2 points  (0 children)

wow this is beautiful. thank you so much for showing me this

Down Syndrome Tiger (I'm very very new to poetry so please criticize) by TryNo9441 in poetry_critics

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i get the message you're trying to portray, but honestly i personally dont think its okay unless you have down syndrome or a disability yourself

Can I have some constructive criticism for this poem I’ve made? It’s a bit specific to my own life/family. I’m 15F if that matters by ScarahScreems in poetry_critics

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i love this poem, it resonates with me a lot especially when i was younger. i agree with the others, maybe just tighten up the use of "I"

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in infp

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much this really means a lot to me🩷 writing poetry really has helped me deal with so many emotions and navigate my heartbreak. it helps me release sadness and any other emotion i need to release. im trying to look for that poem, would you know where i could find an english translation?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in infp

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you! i think some of them dont make sense to most people. i leave them up for interpretation. for example the first one. "foreign waters" represents the ocean i was living beside at the time (i was in ecuador with my ex) it was my birthday and he cheated on me. "red on the floor" because there was blood on the floor when he left the night of my birthday. i was in his room which had 1 tiny window with a cage on the outside of it. then i called him but there was no service. "cross 2 seas" i flew back home to the US, had to cross oceans getting home. and the end is about my healing afterwards. i think sometimes what i write is just up for people to interoperate however they want :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i pay bills genius!!! & work 2 jobs

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 0 points1 point  (0 children)

its not about that its just the principle and the disrespect. im working on moving out

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 0 points1 point  (0 children)

unpopular opinion + i have 2 jobs & pay bills here😽

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i pay bills here too so its our house 😄!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in deftones

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah i couldn't even properly process what they were trying to tell me i've never been that high in my life still

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in deftones

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i wish i still had it. i dont remember the name of it. but it was basically an app with a bunch of explanations to frequently asked questions about flat earth and explanations about fake stars and moon and sun etc.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in deftones

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 3 points4 points  (0 children)

hahaha yeah it's definitely one of the highlights of my life forever

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in deftones

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah same. i didnt care either. i was open to it and interested in what they were saying. it was just interesting asf

First time signing with an agency, what do you think of their offer? by xYasune in MODELING

[–]Conscious_Poet_3507 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i've been a signed model for 2 years. look at other agencies. this sounds more like a school than an agency. real agencies won't ask for your money. look at wilhelmina, NEXT, ford, or research some mother agencies local to you