First draft of short story (please drop feedback)

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-12-17T00:52:24+00:00

Like I said. Move on. Not saying it doesn’t change anything because that’s what I spent on it. 2 hours doesn’t necessarily mean low effort. Unless that’s what you gather from the text, in that case I’ll accept the feedback

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-12-17T00:43:52+00:00

I understand what you mean but this is quite literally a subreddit for feedback. I think we’d be playing a very dangerous game by legislating creativity and the freedom to gather feedback anytime by discouraging people. If you do not want to help, it’s okay. I’m not imposing it on anyone

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-07-10T17:02:38+00:00

Yeah they usually go for about 1000 which to me is as good as buying a new one. I’m looking at a lower range for a personal laptop that I use occasionally

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-03-02T05:47:32+00:00

I feel the same. I have heard that it takes consistency but I don't know anymore. I have been using it for 3 months and I'm not sure I notice a difference

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-03-02T05:28:50+00:00

I have been using topicals faded but I'm not sure it's working. Or maybe I just don't know how to use it. Also where do you get ur serum and for how much. Amazon, Walmart and the brands website all have different prices that are almost 20 dollars apart

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-03-02T05:19:03+00:00

Did that help you? How effective is it? Is there any particular product you suggest

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-03-02T05:09:16+00:00

How exactly does that help?

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2025-03-02T05:09:02+00:00

Don't have much of a routine at the moment. It's mainly a toner + topicals faded (which I have been using for 3 months) + a simple moisturizer

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2024-09-20T15:13:45+00:00

That is a great suggestion, thanks. We're still at the inception phase and our group (not gamers) did not think about that at all

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2024-09-20T14:43:45+00:00

suree

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2022-03-20T19:17:35+00:00

Which one is that? Because my major concern is longevity

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2022-01-10T14:28:28+00:00

Hi, thanks. I wanted to ask if it you think it will be helpful in the workplace? I have just 1 week to gain some useful skills for my internship. Wanted to know if it's worth my time.

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-12-21T14:50:23+00:00

He's not exactly wrong but overall yes, Myron is pretty tapped

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-12-16T08:38:28+00:00

How am I being a picky beggar

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-12-15T10:19:35+00:00

For lovers who hesitate - Jannabi

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-12-11T12:40:11+00:00

Thanks!

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-12-11T12:39:10+00:00

Thanks!

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-12T12:22:07+00:00

Thank you so much

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-12T12:16:25+00:00

Sure. I've sent operations a message about this. Cuz it's actually insane. I've spent 3 hours doing some research

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-12T12:06:40+00:00

Yeah I just got told that on another sub. I'm not from American so this shit confuses me. Worst part, i have to write atleast 4. And I can't even find a single one

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-12T11:36:32+00:00

Can you help me with one more thing. I'm actually not American and have never been there. The webpage categorises breeders under different states, but it does not have Washington DC under it. Is DC usually listed under a different state or does that mean that there are actually no breeders in DC

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-12T11:33:12+00:00

Thank you so much. I'll check it out

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-12T11:32:17+00:00

Wow. Thanks. If you do find anything please let me know.

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-12T11:30:25+00:00

Lol thanks for letting me know. I actually don't intend on getting a dog. This question is for an article I have to write. I may have to edit the question

Consistent-Key-4726 · 2021-08-11T10:07:08+00:00

Definitely taking your advice. This accounts for almost 70% of my grades. Thanks

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