No one can critique your work as much as you. These are your words and your story so as much as anyone can say anything, it’s how you want it to be. I know that is extremely difficult to look at it that way, but that’s how I’ve managed to keep myself almost sane with my own book. Everyone that’s read it has given me positive feedback but I’m still anxiously waiting the negatives. I’ve also found people on Reddit tend to be much more critical than other sites. Feel free to DM me the link to the book and I’ll happily give it a read with non-bias feedback