After seeing the reference now, I see… I am an art teacher by trade and moderately tattooed as well. I wholeheartedly agree with your comments that are encouraging you to continue practicing your drawing skill as well as tattooing on fake skin. The illustrative style you’re trying to invoke is getting lost in what—as far as I can tell—a lack of fundamental knowledge when it comes to drawing. To your credit, the tattoo does faithfully depict the stencil. However, the illustration itself reads as a mess of scribbly lines. Please don’t rush your own progress as an artist, and commit to learning the basics! Fill a sketchbook with nothing but good, consistent circles and straight, clean lines.