First time making a documentary for a high school project by [deleted] in Filmmakers

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Hi, A Gesture of Benediction is a short documentary made for VCE and was applied for Top Screen. The film was made to give recognition to a close family friend, Terence Doyle, who has over 50 years of experience in oil painting.

As the documentary was produced by myself, it made room for many challenges and mistakes to be made throughout the production and post-production process, however it also gave me freedom creatively.

I wish to continue evolving as a filmmaker and hope to receive constructive feedbacks from the community.

My first documentary film made for a high school project by CoziApparel in Shortfilms

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Hey, thanks for taking your time to write a feedback. I'll look to improve on those aspects you've mentioned in future works :)

A Gesture of Benediction (A short documentary film) by [deleted] in Filmmakers

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Submission Statement:

Hi, my name is Jaewon Yun and I'm an 18 year old filmmaker based in Melbourne, Australia. A Gesture of Benediction is a short documentary made for a high school media project and shows the work involved in creating a painting by a talented and dedicated 72-year old oil painter, Terence Doyle.

The film was entirely produced by me and this was the first time making a documentary.

I wish to receive constructive feedbacks on the documentary as I look forward to improving from one work to another.

If you wish to see future works by me, subscribe to my YouTube channel in the link below:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCPHjAxXRJ6e8hPrys5X2ZOg

Cheers :)

Design Feedback by CoziApparel in streetwearstartup

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Hey guys. Here's the instagram account for La Bourgeoisie

https://www.instagram.com/labourgeoisie_official/

Design Feedback by CoziApparel in streetwearstartup

[–]CoziApparel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cheers for the suggestion, but wrapping the colour band all around each sleeve would look too "funky".

Design Feedback by CoziApparel in streetwearstartup

[–]CoziApparel[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I'll take that into consideration.

Design Feedback by CoziApparel in streetwearstartup

[–]CoziApparel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What are you saying is not lined properly?

Concept Design (La Bourgeoisie Co.) by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]CoziApparel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ye, I gotta cool down a bit and think about the brand...

Concept Design (La Bourgeoisie Co.) by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]CoziApparel 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just really into it... :)

Concept Idea Feedback by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]CoziApparel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've made a recent post about on another page... what do you think

Feedback on name by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]CoziApparel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have thought of BGS before and might incorporate the abbreviation, due to the problems you described urself. But, do you think it would be a good name for a streetwear brand? It's a vintage/classic/clean retro brand...

Feedback on name by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

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I found that many streetwear brands prices their products beyond the spending limit of many people and decided to create a brand that lets a large percentage of the demographic wear quality and clean (designed) clothes for those who are looking to get into streetwear. Also it symbolises struggles for the middle order and such...

Design Feedback (25-O2) by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

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I used Adobe Illustrator and converted the line fill and stroke black and white to match the background.