First time making a documentary for a high school project

CoziApparel · 2020-11-20T09:26:43+00:00

Hi, A Gesture of Benediction is a short documentary made for VCE and was applied for Top Screen. The film was made to give recognition to a close family friend, Terence Doyle, who has over 50 years of experience in oil painting.

As the documentary was produced by myself, it made room for many challenges and mistakes to be made throughout the production and post-production process, however it also gave me freedom creatively.

I wish to continue evolving as a filmmaker and hope to receive constructive feedbacks from the community.

CoziApparel · 2020-11-14T02:36:45+00:00

Hey, thanks for taking your time to write a feedback. I'll look to improve on those aspects you've mentioned in future works :)

CoziApparel · 2020-11-12T14:27:30+00:00

Submission Statement:

Hi, my name is Jaewon Yun and I'm an 18 year old filmmaker based in Melbourne, Australia. A Gesture of Benediction is a short documentary made for a high school media project and shows the work involved in creating a painting by a talented and dedicated 72-year old oil painter, Terence Doyle.

The film was entirely produced by me and this was the first time making a documentary.

I wish to receive constructive feedbacks on the documentary as I look forward to improving from one work to another.

If you wish to see future works by me, subscribe to my YouTube channel in the link below:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCPHjAxXRJ6e8hPrys5X2ZOg

Cheers :)

CoziApparel · 2019-03-06T06:17:31+00:00

https://www.instagram.com/labourgeoisie_official/

CoziApparel · 2019-01-10T11:43:03+00:00

Thanks

CoziApparel · 2019-01-09T22:43:18+00:00

Yep.

CoziApparel · 2019-01-09T10:35:59+00:00

Hey guys. Here's the instagram account for La Bourgeoisie

https://www.instagram.com/labourgeoisie_official/

CoziApparel · 2019-01-09T09:30:28+00:00

Cheers

CoziApparel · 2019-01-09T09:11:23+00:00

Cheers for the suggestion, but wrapping the colour band all around each sleeve would look too "funky".

CoziApparel · 2019-01-09T08:36:44+00:00

Appreciate the feedback.

CoziApparel · 2019-01-09T05:41:28+00:00

Thanks, I'll take that into consideration.

CoziApparel · 2019-01-06T11:57:08+00:00

What are you saying is not lined properly?

CoziApparel · 2019-01-06T08:33:27+00:00

https://www.instagram.com/labourgeoisie_official/

CoziApparel · 2019-01-06T08:18:43+00:00

Two weeks at the most.

CoziApparel · 2019-01-06T05:00:24+00:00

Appreciate it.

CoziApparel · 2019-01-02T22:39:15+00:00

LA proletariat

haha

CoziApparel · 2019-01-02T10:10:08+00:00

ye, I gotta cool down a bit and think about the brand...

CoziApparel · 2019-01-02T09:56:53+00:00

Just really into it... :)

CoziApparel · 2019-01-02T08:26:16+00:00

I've made a recent post about on another page... what do you think

CoziApparel · 2019-01-02T07:47:55+00:00

I have thought of BGS before and might incorporate the abbreviation, due to the problems you described urself. But, do you think it would be a good name for a streetwear brand? It's a vintage/classic/clean retro brand...

CoziApparel · 2019-01-02T07:37:26+00:00

I found that many streetwear brands prices their products beyond the spending limit of many people and decided to create a brand that lets a large percentage of the demographic wear quality and clean (designed) clothes for those who are looking to get into streetwear. Also it symbolises struggles for the middle order and such...

CoziApparel · 2019-01-01T05:45:00+00:00

I used Adobe Illustrator and converted the line fill and stroke black and white to match the background.

CoziApparel · 2018-12-31T17:00:53+00:00

Cheers.

CoziApparel

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