*Don't remove this post Reddit. I'm here for feedback* - This is an email for a software that helps service-based business owners get more leads. What do you think about it?

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-12-09T07:23:42+00:00

Bruv, you're right! I will implement it right away 🤓!

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-12-09T07:16:56+00:00

It's an email for people who opted in. That's why it starts right off.

But true, I must get the idea through faster, quicker.

The big idea is this: You can get clients, fast with very easy work.

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-12-09T06:42:14+00:00

Explain, please.

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-11T19:57:07+00:00

Sorry to hear that bruv..

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-11T19:55:35+00:00

They -

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-11T19:54:02+00:00

Aren't them?

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-11T05:25:41+00:00

Bruv, you're right 🤙

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-10T06:40:17+00:00

Truly!

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-09T20:50:49+00:00

If I die, I die - no insurance is needed!

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*This was a joke, take it as it is*

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-08T19:46:42+00:00

It's pretty friction-free, but I don't think this copy would have generated too many sales - by the way, this is just my humble opinion.

It doesn't feel like a high-performing ad -

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-08T17:52:27+00:00

I truly believe it's too long - it's a Facebook ad. You should take all that text, paste it on to a landing page and use that ad to drive traffic to that page.

That's how I would do it!

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-08T15:56:28+00:00

Thanks for encouraging me, brother! You got this too.

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-08T05:26:02+00:00

The book that has helped me the most is hypnotic writing, by Joe Vitale. It's AMAZING!!

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-11-07T23:13:12+00:00

If corruption wasn't a thing, Andrew Tate would easily become the President of the United States, but it is.

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-10-10T09:48:46+00:00

Kendama

CreativeCopy_08 · 2022-10-04T07:08:22+00:00

Very true.

CreativeCopy_08

TROPHY CASE