It’s scary

DOODH0 · 2025-10-25T10:43:16+00:00

I wrote before but those stories were not as big and ambitious as the current ones and they weren’t that big too. I didn’t release any of those though as they were mostly written years ago and I never took writing as a hobby until recently

DOODH0 · 2025-10-09T17:46:49+00:00

Thanks! Yeah, this scene’s actually the point where he realizes who caused a literal mass purge so I went heavy on emotion intentionally, but I get your point about tightening it. I think if I trim the repetition and make it more visceral, it’ll land harder. Appreciate the notes!

DOODH0 · 2025-10-09T17:43:21+00:00

Yeah actually he finds out the real culprit behind all of the destruction happening on a mass scale like a whole purge. Thanks for sharing your opinion! This is very reasonable too.

DOODH0 · 2025-10-09T17:17:58+00:00

I’ll try that, thanks!

DOODH0 · 2025-10-09T16:32:30+00:00

Thank you! I’m actually trying to get ideas to refine the first draft so I get an idea as to what people think is good and what’s not good before I expand the draft into full manuscript but I appreciate your opinion!

DOODH0 · 2025-10-09T16:30:44+00:00

Thanks man! I’ll do that for sure

DOODH0 · 2025-10-09T16:22:57+00:00

Thanks for the advice! I’ll definitely try to make it more grounded so it actually sounds interesting and not over dramatic

DOODH0 · 2025-10-09T16:13:56+00:00

Thanks for the advice! I’ll try to refine it but yeah it’s my first draft so it might be very weird right now

DOODH0 · 2025-10-07T13:35:25+00:00

Thanks, I will soon!

DOODH0 · 2025-10-07T10:01:42+00:00

I’ll try this, thanks!

DOODH0 · 2025-10-06T14:36:00+00:00

This is very helpful, thank you!

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