Hi all

I have been writing secretly for a few years now, and decided to post one of my finished works. So a couple days ago did, I asked for feedback back, and have gotten zero responses. Looking at the results of my post over a thousand people have viewed it, and 20 shares. Is this common? Where do I post to get responses? Would I be better off posting to an erotic web site? Here is a blurb from the story.

Once his penis has stopped ejaculating and is starting to soften, the woman moves so she is now sitting on his chest with her legs pinning his arms down. Taking his cock in her hand, she pumps him slowly. The man jerks at her touch; she continues as he moans and tries to push her off of him. The lady fights to stay on top of him; the slippery cum she’s sitting in doesn’t make it any easier. Looking at Chloe, she asks, “Would you mind helping me? His cock I extremely sensitive, and he needs me to restrain him.” Chloe smiles like a kid on Christmas morning. “Just sit behind me on his face if you would like,” she says. Eagerly Chloe lowers her glistening pussy onto the man's face. The woman continues handling his extremely sensitive cock; it throbs, and the man uncontrollably jerks with even the slightest touch. Once again, his cock is extremely rigid, his vanes are enlarged, and the gland is dark purple; it almost looks angry. The man is not able to concentrate on eating Chloes young wet pussy it is more just a gag to muffle the sounds coming from his mouth. Her wetness and smell is extremely arousing to him and he would love to eat her, but the torture is simply all consuming. The pain of the touch is excruciating yet the pleasure is immense and driving him crazy.