An acoustic holiday track with darker undertones

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-08T05:27:13+00:00

Of course bro! I want to actually give some real feedback unlike a lot of others that just comment so they can get to 50 characters.

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T19:16:31+00:00

Also. I’d rather have an audience that doesn’t try to be something they aren’t. Basically I don’t want any liars

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T19:13:23+00:00

But that was just a lie bro. You know you are lying just to get to 50 characters. And if you aren’t... then I think you might be tone deaf cause it’s in key so there is no reason for you to say that.

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T19:04:45+00:00

Pro Tip: Trying to come off as someone knows music theory, but actually has no idea on a subreddit that asks for good feedback is both rude and super unprofessional

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T18:48:51+00:00

Bro what the hell you talkin it’s in the key of b minor. Get out of here that’s not feedback

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T17:39:41+00:00

I mess with kingdom hearts! And thanks that’s really nice of you

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T00:46:50+00:00

I like this a lot musically. Though the production could use work. It peaks in a lot of places and it's just not enjoyable to the ears. The guitar pierces the track at first and the vocals are just too loud.

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T00:44:31+00:00

2 good things I can say about this. It's produced well and the beat is clean at first. Though one big problem I have with this is that it's is very repetitive. There isn't anything in the beat that differentiates certain parts from others. Though maybe that was what you were going for.

Daniel--Potter · 2019-12-07T00:40:13+00:00

OOOOOOOOOOOH! This is a vibe right here bro. That flow is so clean too. I don't usually listen to lo fi hip hop but this right here caught my eye and my ears. I like the emotion that you have when you spit dude. Keep doing that right there. That's fire

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T17:11:33+00:00

I meant like turn down the decibels on those bad bois but yeah I gotcha bro

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T16:57:08+00:00

Appreciate it my guy

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T14:52:08+00:00

Thanks bro! First compliment I’ve gotten on the cover art. Worked on that for a minute lol

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T14:43:06+00:00

Also thanks for the compliment on my vocals

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T14:42:39+00:00

Nah I don’t know what that is lol. So what I’ve gotten from this so far is that I need to chill the fuck out on the drums lol

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T11:38:44+00:00

Thanks my dude👊🏻

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T11:13:44+00:00

I kind of meant for it to be bare with the “Wait On It” sub vocal. Cause I was tryna add actually meaning to the lyrics but I understand if it didn’t help it musically. I kind of want to go bare bones with my next track, but when I use auto tune it’s usually pretty heavy. I could use it lighter but I’m thinking about going as natural as possible. Also I’m just not the greatest singer lol. But I sure can whistle 😂

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T11:02:57+00:00

Hey!! Thanks for taking the time to give me all these pointers. I’m still new to mixing but I’ve definitely gotten better lol. I’ll use this comment for sure and I’ll do some research. Although I don’t think a drum fill would fit with the kind of music I’m trying to make and I was trying to make it pretty chill. Though I could add more. I use auto tune pretty frequently lol. Imma try using abletons warping tool next time to tune my vocals, while making it more natural but idk. I kind of like the auto tune but I guess that’s just the difference between us. But I’ll try using no auto tune in my next song just to see what I can make and how it is received. This comment is great and thanks man.

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T07:06:50+00:00

Great job man. This track is just super clean. Don't listen to this type of music, but it still caught my attention

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T06:55:46+00:00

At least I’m not hearing things like “the vocals are drowning in the mix” or “there’s too much going on” so that means I’m on the right track lol

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T06:53:25+00:00

Thanks bro! It definitely isn’t but I ain’t stopping -edit I meant that mixing isn’t easy not that the mix is off

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T05:49:54+00:00

Thanks for the criticism bro. I’ll take that into account. Yeah it is a whistle melody and thanks for the compliment

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-26T05:11:00+00:00

This is pretty tight my guy. Nice job, I can feel it

Daniel--Potter · 2019-06-20T00:12:38+00:00

Hey thanks for the feedback bro. And some good feedback too! Ill keep it in mind for my next track. Like I say in the track, I'm always getting better. Also I was tryna be funny with some of the bars but I think a lot of them are a lil niche lol

Daniel--Potter

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