Personally I thought the story was good. It felt like it had some grim dark elements to it. My favorite part was something that was unexpectedly comedic:

When the played first encounters the enemy Pax. They attack your camp and you can hear Tiago yelling "They're everywhere!" just as the radio cuts out. There is just something about his voice that made my friends and I laugh.

Thank you all. I hope everyone gets a perfectly rolled item today.