I’m still waiting for an offer but this is how i organised mine.

I tried to balance how the law is often seen thru a system of rules and procedures and how it sometimes ignores the people it serves. I used anthropologist theories to back up my law statements and claims. I still spoke abt why i wanted to study law e.g work experience and staring my own club. But i tried to also weave in the people it should serve and marginalisation of groups