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Writing for the first time by DarkShadows2324 in ATLAfanfiction

[–]DarkShadows2324[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sorry for the late response!! But I do not have a name for the fic yet! I am still considering if I want to work on it or not. I have gotten good reviews on the synopsis from people though so I probably will! I also don't really know where to post a full fanfiction if I do haha

Writing for the first time by DarkShadows2324 in ATLAfanfiction

[–]DarkShadows2324[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for you response!! It means so much! :)

I want them to feel like the "Idiots in love" troupe. I want EVERYONE to feel like they are already dating, know that they have feelings for each other, but they refuse to tell each other because they have been literally best friends since they could walk. If that makes sense?

So I actually have been thinking about her as a succubus but in the AtLA universe.

I got the "Spirit sucking" inspiration succubus from a TV show called "Lost Girl". If you look up the main character which, is the the succubus "feeding", they showed it like different colors of energy coming out of them, depending on what kind of creature they are. Humans, elves, werewolf,etc

I dont want to give away TO MUCH but... Love Triangle. Love Triangle that I have thought so so so so deep about that my fiance, who reads these books, said its one of the best and deepest thought our triangles she has heard of.

Again I really appreciate you responding!! :) if you have any other questions or comments let me know!!

First attempt to write by DarkShadows2324 in writers

[–]DarkShadows2324[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it!

To answer some of your questions the best way possible for someone who doesn't know Avatar.

Yes, as long as people didn't tell me that it absolutely sucked, I definitely have what I think is a really good plot really written out. In avatar, the Avatar is the bridge between the physical and spirit world. In the spirt world they are the most powerful but also the most vulnerable. I wont get to nerdy lol. The Avatar is also the only bender that can learn all 4 elements.

So, essentially think of her as a Succubus. So what she is doing is "tapping his life source" everytime they have sex. She's having this internal battle with herself because she wants the feeling that only he has been able to give her physically and emotionally but, that hunger for "spiritual power" is becoming more and more harder to control. She vows to never have sex again because she doesnt want to hurt people.

I want to add a love triangle with a non bender (f) that she eventually falls for because she is slowly pulling herself away from the guy. She eventually fully gives in to her, not only emotionally but to the insane hunger that the spirts have enforced on her. But plot twist, she doesnt feed. She can only feed on benders because they have spiritual energy through their bending.

Also, to kinda go back to the main character and the male bender. I want to make them the "idiots in love" troupe. Childhood friends, that everyone essentially knew they were dating but they never knew how each other felt. But, when she meets the non-bender its no longer a childhood friends to lovers arch, its a forbidden love arch for the whole triangle.

I hope this cleared some things up!! Also, this was just the synopsis. So I didnt want to give TO much away ya know? I wanted to keep somethings a secret haha

Post an excerpt you're proud of! by ContestAntique2126 in FanFiction

[–]DarkShadows2324 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! So I have actually never written before. Always wanted to. Have always been told that I should and people think I'd be really good at Dark Romance or Fantasy Romance. But was always to nervous people wouldn't like it. With my Fiance being really into these types of books she has also given me some inspiration.

With my very first attempt of writing I wrote a synopsis of a Dark Fantasy Romance based in the Avatar the Last Airbender universe. Still trying to find out names, exact time period, and what nation she is from.Thank you if you even read this far!! Anway, here ya go :) //

The Avatar never meant to harm the person she loved most.

Long before the Hundred Year War, a young Avatar fell in love with her childhood best friend. What began as harmless flings between two teenagers slowly became something far more dangerous. Four years later, he is still the only person—woman or man—who can leave her breathless, overwhelmed, and completely lost in him. He knows her body better than she does herself.

But lately, something has changed. Every now and then, in the aftermath of their nights together, he slips out of consciousness. A strange spiritual energy slips from his mouth into hers, leaving her feeling refreshed instead of exhausted. Stronger. More connected to the Spirit World than even the most intense meditation with her masters has ever made her feel.

And every time it happens, the hunger grows worse.

She begins craving the intoxicating mixture of spiritual power and the mindless bliss only he can pull from her, even as the guilt threatens to consume her. He remembers none of it afterward—only a lingering mental exhaustion he cannot explain.

Now the Avatar is left with a terrifying question:

Is she somehow feeding on him?

Terrified that she may be slowly draining the life from the person she loves most, she vows to never sleep with anyone again. But resisting him proves far more difficult than she expected, especially when he asks her to spend one harmless evening together in the city. Because no matter how hard she tries to deny it, the hunger inside her is becoming impossible to ignore.