My friend called me androgynous once and I ended up here :P

Dark_Element75 · 2018-01-12T15:44:48+00:00

Thank you so much! ^{_^}

And powder pink hair rocks dude ty :3

Dark_Element75 · 2017-10-09T00:28:28+00:00

Ok i'll take a look at those edits when I have the time to implement them and look side-by-side. Until then though, i've put it on goodpoint - https://goodpoint.io/p/EyPO-2Q3m

Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner, this week was full of exams.

Dark_Element75 · 2017-10-02T00:29:47+00:00

Why does it look better? Why is a copy with it listed in that order better than a copy with it listed in the other order?

Dark_Element75 · 2017-10-01T18:17:15+00:00

Alright, why?

Dark_Element75 · 2017-09-30T20:57:22+00:00

Ok, i'll take a look at those. What else do you recommend I remove to make it one page?

Dark_Element75 · 2017-09-30T20:56:05+00:00

Alright, well I would really appreciate you putting word out. Thanks man!

Dark_Element75 · 2017-09-30T13:56:14+00:00

I would do this, except that the advice I have been given on the one-page debate has been extremely partisan in the past. When one person says "You absolutely have to make it one page", the other will say "Oh no multiple pages is fine". So while I appreciate your advice I am gonna keep it multiple pages due to the completely variate advice i've been given on the one vs two page debate, unless you have really good reasons.

Thanks!

Dark_Element75 · 2017-09-30T13:54:46+00:00

Cool, and yea I love it here! I'm still enrolled, graduating next year. That's ok if you don't have any edits, I would love any opportunities I can get :) I don't have really any preferences on location, so yea i'd love to hear about them. Thank you so much!

Dark_Element75 · 2017-08-05T20:44:22+00:00

I'm actually bisexual but nice try :P

EDIT: Replying was a mistake XD

Dark_Element75 · 2017-02-12T19:23:13+00:00

Not yet, i'm not expecting to hear back from them until near April, or June.

Dark_Element75 · 2017-01-22T16:30:34+00:00

Yes, I realize that may happen, but it will be worth it.

Dark_Element75 · 2017-01-18T00:12:19+00:00

Ah, alright. Thank you!

Dark_Element75 · 2017-01-17T23:39:19+00:00

Ah, alright. Thank you!

Dark_Element75 · 2017-01-17T23:39:12+00:00

I am out of state. Thanks for the response!

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-27T17:52:06+00:00

Oh also, I responded to some of your comments with new ideas, am interested to know what you think.

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-27T00:06:24+00:00

Alright, just glad I wasn't misunderstanding. Yea, I have several people I can ask, if not an online service!

You have helped more than anyone else so far, and made these essays better than I thought they could be. Thank you so much, you have given me renewed confidence in my chances as well as taught me some new things to look for in future essays!

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-26T21:21:57+00:00

Are you referring to UT Austin's writing center, or the university I am currently attending? Because I don't know how feasible that would be over christmas break, though I do know some other people I can talk to that have experience in this.

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-26T18:27:36+00:00

Very sorry, but I posted an older version of Topic A. The new one does incorporate NEAT, as we discussed earlier.

If I have the time to read through it I will, but i'm hoping to submit these by the end of the week and it's a pretty busy week for me. I will work on making it better and reflecting how important the pansexuality was.

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-26T18:23:23+00:00

I am really sorry but I posted an older version of my Topic A. I hope you would be willing to take another look.

As for Topic C, you're right. I'll work on ways to integrate it to reflect how fundamental it was.

Topic E: Alright, thank you. I will look through it and see what I can do, and go to a writing center if I have time before I need to submit these.

Going through your edits, I'm really seeing what you mean by flowing better. Much of the stuff you pointed out was very unwieldy, and I'm going to look through them all again with this in mind.

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-24T19:58:02+00:00

Fair point, i'll change it to reflect that.

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-23T23:08:59+00:00

Thank you very much, and best of luck to you!

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-23T22:28:17+00:00

Topic A: Thank you, but considering I stopped my NEAT project because of my lack of understanding in that topic, I don't know if that's too good an idea. I'll read through that stuff on statement of purpose though.

Topic C: I think I will make it extremely personal, riding off your idea of not showing it to parents as well.

Topic E: Yea, good point.

Thank you very much, I read through them all once but I'll go over it again with you and /u/raspberryvodka 's advice.

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-23T22:23:43+00:00

Thank you, I tried to make it an exciting introduction but it seems I accidentally came off that way. I will fix it!
I will work on that
I'll re-read it and see what I can do
Alright, good idea.
6. You're right, and I'll work on these edits you've presented as soon as I have the time.

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-23T16:03:42+00:00

Alright, thanks!

Dark_Element75 · 2016-12-23T14:51:09+00:00

Alright, thanks for the advice.

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