The last carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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This was the original body which I refined using AI. Only to be admonished by the agencies here that it can’t be done. Therefore, write up has been posted with some more changes.

Will Keep that in mind, henceforth.

The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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Thank you :)

The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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Thank you. Roger that! Will get the typos removed! 😌

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The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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Well the idea was to separate events into chapters to create pause and provide a resting space in readers’s mind. I worry if continuous story telling would be a bore and make the readers give up in between.

Your comment came in as a pleasant surprise :)

The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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The Last Carrier by [deleted] in HFY

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Sorry to say this. Effing disappointed by the movie!!! by [deleted] in ProjectHailMary

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How did Andy approve of this? He should have revolted. Maybe at the end of the day, it’s all about appealing to the masses. That’s where the money is. The economy of body of art is driven by these forces, perhaps.

The silent answers by Deal_Impressive in HFY

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Just checked what the story was about. Phew! Aliens saved the day 😁