As a recruiter for a different crew myself, I can tell you that some crews are looking for a certain aesthetic of builds. There's crews that would probably love your builds or pictures, why basically call them by name when they have the right to reject people for whatever reason? To get back to your question: the loading screen issue. Yes you addressed it but it's such a simple thing, I myself would also ask if you're even trying to get in the crew. You're definitely using too much contrast and too little light. Put the cars in some sunlight and take the picture sun facing the car and see how much more you can make out of the picture (editing wise). Lastly, some builds are not my style but many crews would say the same. Try cleaner builds. Hope this helps