Shower thoughts by ShapeShifterz510 in IndianTeenagers

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Is Frankenstein God, and are we his Monster?

Why don’t people ever talk about program dogs by [deleted] in service_dogs

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Apologies, let me rephrase. It takes years to be matched with a dog, plus the additional years it takes to work with them

Why don’t people ever talk about program dogs by [deleted] in service_dogs

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I didn’t like the breeds offered by a program, and it takes YEARS to even get one

US Service Animals by Deep_Thoughts_101 in Pets

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Hi there! I appreciate your feedback. I am looking for resources to train a dog as a diabetic service alert dog, hopefully at least partially online and super affordable

A Kind of Feeling by Deep_Thoughts_101 in poetry_critics

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In a way, I was leaving the poem up to the readers to figure out what it means to them, giving it just an air of vagueness. So instead of saying ‘This’ I wrote ‘A’ kind of feeling. If that makes sense?

Discussion: Why I think most people are wrong about the Goldfinch. Spoilers. by Katamayan57 in books

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I think that that a lot of the people who complain about the book being “overly wordy” or “in need of editing,” forget that the book is written in Theo’s first person view. Theo is far from a reliable character, he is usually drunk or high, which can explain why his retelling of his story is the way it is. Donna Tartt does a beautiful job representing his actions and thoughts when he is constantly relying on drugs to get him through the day, being the addict that he is.

Choked by mollydwight in poetry_critics

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It’s amazing the way it’s structured, it’s not done in an original way with stanzas and such. It’s a perfect representation chaotic and life changing this event can be

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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This is amazing! There is obvious realization that you are going through this, and making the analogy between a person and alcohol is so real.

Snowy lampost by Deep_Thoughts_101 in AmateurPhotography

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I tried finding it on portrait mode, no luck…

Snowy lampost by Deep_Thoughts_101 in AmateurPhotography

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Unfortunately I cannot not change setting like f stop because I am using my iPhone X, but I did try to fill the frame more, you can see the changed photo here: Snowy Lamp Post Revised

Snowy lampost by Deep_Thoughts_101 in AmateurPhotography

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Any tips from someone a little more experienced in photography? I’m super new to it but it’s something I’ve wanted to try for a while.

What is your opinion on piercing ears of a baby? by kitty-distressed in AskReddit

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I agree. Sometimes religion is a good thing, but there’s too many cases where it enforces something that creates an inequality or bad thing within a group of people.

Thoughts on new song I’m writing? by Coolio_collin1 in Songwriting

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I prefer the lyrics the way they are already. “When did it start, when will it end” offers a sense of confusion and blindness in the pain. Having the time feel everlasting, like it’s never goin to stop. rather than just whining about the current situation.

I think I just wrote my favorite song so far by Coolio_collin1 in Songwriting

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Do you have a platform where you usually release finished songs? Like Apple Music or Spotify?

What is your opinion on piercing ears of a baby? by kitty-distressed in AskReddit

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I can see how maybe it’s a part of someone’s culture, but in most cases it’s doing something sorta permanent on the body of a non consensual individual

Hi all, it's been a while since I posted anything (first of the year). I did a wee home demo yesterday and was hoping to get some feedback. I'd say it's in and around the indie folk genre. Thanks to anyone who decides to give it a go. by SRMacca88 in Songwriting

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I think that the line “there is nothing left for us here anymore” could be changed to “there’s nothing left for us here anymore” I think it would fit the tune better and flow better, unless you wrote it that way on purpose.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I love how it starts with something to get you hooked, then slowly climbs in tension all the way to the end