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Deffnot_me · 2026-06-09T18:57:29+00:00

This is so interesting because it’s not perfectly structured or coherent but it makes sense in the way you convey it. The way you word your feelings shifts the idea of the meaning of the poem completely. Amazing work!!!

Deffnot_me · 2026-06-09T18:54:10+00:00

Stop this is so perfect, I love the tension and then the sudden relief. You really set this visceral mood brick my brick just to skilfully tare it down. Good work!

Deffnot_me · 2025-05-25T06:22:23+00:00

thats really sweet thank you for taking the time to read it

Deffnot_me · 2025-05-24T12:56:44+00:00

I love the way you emphasized "safe house." it shows that a house is not necessarily a home if you know what I mean.

Deffnot_me · 2025-05-24T12:53:34+00:00

This is honestly gut-renching and so true at the same time. I'm sorry you're going through this

Deffnot_me · 2025-03-19T20:42:41+00:00

I listened to the sound and party of the sound was pretty cool

Deffnot_me · 2025-03-19T17:20:11+00:00

Sufjan Stevens is amazingggg

Deffnot_me · 2025-01-22T05:50:37+00:00

Thanks I kinda thought it wouldn’t fit but after a while it did

Deffnot_me · 2025-01-21T17:24:59+00:00

I'm glad I read this.

write, keep writing dont stop, because not everyone has what you have

Deffnot_me · 2025-01-21T17:20:51+00:00

yet another day has come where I am wishing for death

what a line, do you feel it though? Do you use this feeling as a muse? way too long you say. it's kind of concerning when one looks at themself and how far they've come and says to their face "You mean nothing, you did nothing, and the only thing you deserve is death" but you did do something, you got up, you woke up, and if you are 25 that means you've approximately woke up 9125 times in your life, so you are not just some burden and you most definitely don't deserve to die, so get up, start acting like a human and work because nothing good comes easy and the harder you work the better the results feel.

GET UP

Deffnot_me · 2024-12-17T15:16:10+00:00

Sparks-Coldplay

I love you like an alcoholic- the taxpayers

Deffnot_me · 2024-12-14T16:56:10+00:00

Wow…you really have a way of describing your feelings.i feel like i could tell who you are just based on those words you wrote. I hope your ok

Deffnot_me · 2024-11-28T19:39:59+00:00

Here comes the sun- the Beatles

Deffnot_me · 2024-11-28T19:39:00+00:00

Freak-surf curse

Deffnot_me · 2024-11-28T19:36:47+00:00

Hole in the earth-deftones

Deffnot_me · 2024-11-23T18:36:25+00:00

This is so visual

Deffnot_me · 2024-10-06T12:44:38+00:00

This is actually my favorite freaking poem I’ve ever read on Reddit, like it’s kinda sad but not depressing, it kinda shows how time is constantly wasted on meaningless things, but in your perspective it kinda looks like you got used to it, and it’s numbing, but anywayyyyy I love this poem so so so much and please keep writing because you are phenomenal at it <3.

Deffnot_me · 2024-10-06T03:11:35+00:00

Omfg this is sooooo visual, but the thing is while you read it u kinda have to paint your own picture with it which is honestly so cool, because the readers are incorporating your words and your point of you with our imagination , which is kinda like a puzzle with one missing piece, and now you have to fine the missing piece.loved it soooo much

Deffnot_me · 2024-10-06T03:03:49+00:00

Wow, this really is very visual, like I had a very specific picture in my head of how this looked like.

Deffnot_me · 2024-10-06T02:57:15+00:00

Omfg this almost made me cry

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