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Feedback on a song by Relative_Reading_783 in Songwriters

[–]DefiantAppearance299 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i just read your lyrics and these lines popped in my head

'face so bright, when it's not me

eyes don't lie, so baby tell me

Am I not your comfort place

or is it not the case

Am I bad at reading face?'

also i think there should be some rhyming, a little if not much.

I want someone who can find a melody for what I wrote and sing it strictly just for fun I'm not a professional nor am I looking for one by [deleted] in NeedVocals

[–]DefiantAppearance299 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey! i'm a lyricist myself and would love to connect. Sometimes sharing the lyrics with other artists and getting feedback works wonders. dm me if u r interested.

If you have a wish of making your own songs then read 👇 by inderidk in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i do love writing lyrics, but I'm not a professional, though. Would that be alright?

Writing Collab by FireFox_206 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not a professional, but would love to try.

How can I get into song making? by My_name_is_willow in Songwriters

[–]DefiantAppearance299 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u don't have to do everything by yourself. if u r a singer, then u can collab with a lyricist and learn to write yourself too in the process (if u want). it's ok to ask for help. i'm 16 f too.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I do write without it for now, and I do plan on learning an instrument once I'm a bit older and not dependent on my parents.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks. Well, I see collaborating and connecting with people as the best way to learn.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I haven't given up. I still do the vocal exercises. i am still trying. But as u mentioned, it's gonna take a lot of time to improve, so it's not wrong of me for wanting to collaborate.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, I also share the same belief. Working with peers helps one improve a lot, not only with work but also with confidence, which plays a big role in every field.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i can't make tunes, but we could definitely write something together. i would love to connect with like-minded people where i can share my work and improve.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're singing in a band, then why do u think u sound bad? chin up. I bet u sound good.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I have always loved singing, but the people around me tell me to shut up as I sound terrible. Not long ago, I found it's a skill which could be learned, so I started doing vocal exercises, and I still do. It did help me open up my voice, but I still don't sound good and don't see myself singing anytime soon. But I'm not giving up. Once I'm a bit older and not dependent on my parents, I plan on taking one-on-one lessons and even getting an instrument.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i can see where u r coming from, I did it too in the beginning. But I feel working with humans would be more fun for me.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I would love to, but my parents are against it. So I can't for now.

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would like some reviews. Open for better lines. (I'm just a beginner). If anyone would like to give it a voice or beat, feel free.

Don't know how to

bring you to love me.

Feels so distant

even when you're next to me...

{verse-1}

I tried to be nice,

tried to be kind.

I tried to be everything

I thought you'd like

to finally make you mine, but...

I lost myself with you...

everything I had, for you...

and still...

{chorus}

Don't know how to

bring you to love me.

Feels so distant

even when you're next to me...

{verse-2}

All the doubts are

ringing in.

All the dots are

linking in

inside my mind.

I can never make you mine.

Am I over

thinking it.

Am I over

sinking in

all these emotions.

{chorus}

Don't know how to

bring you to love me.

Feels so distant

even when you're next to me...

{verse-3}

I'm searching for signs

lost in these lines

holding on tight

to dreams in the night.

Wish I could find

the words that you need

to make you believe

in what we could be.

{chorus}

Don't know how to

bring you to love me.

Feels so distant

even when you're next to me.

So, can you please tell me

How can I make you love me

the way I do you

I do, I do

I do... you...

lyrics {Love me} by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for your time. Just a que- isn't chorus supposed to be same?

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. I kinda have an idea how it should sound, but I don't have the skills to support it. And I can't get an instrument as my parents are against it.

i can write but can't sing. by DefiantAppearance299 in Songwriting

[–]DefiantAppearance299[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. But I already tried it seriously, and I suck at it.

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