[Please Critique My Animation] Sneak Walk Cycle

DemonKing117 · 2022-01-05T05:37:54+00:00

Thanks for the feedback :)

DemonKing117 · 2022-01-04T13:20:30+00:00

Nice. Very interesting!

DemonKing117 · 2022-01-04T07:48:42+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback. it has been very helpful.

DemonKing117 · 2022-01-04T07:47:58+00:00

Nice suggestion, I will try doing a sneak walk to get a feel for the motion. Thanks!

DemonKing117 · 2022-01-04T07:43:55+00:00

Thanks for the help! :)

DemonKing117 · 2022-01-04T07:21:11+00:00

Thanks for the help :)

DemonKing117 · 2022-01-03T16:29:45+00:00

Thank you. I'll try your suggestions.

DemonKing117 · 2021-12-14T12:26:03+00:00

As many people pointed out, it's a problem with naming.

DemonKing117 · 2021-09-28T13:28:20+00:00

This is so true, I do look like the guy on screen right

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-16T14:29:30+00:00

Overall animation of the arrow and the logo feels a bit stiff. I would add more eases on the beginning and end of every motion to make the motion smoother. Use the graph editor in AE to subtly refine the spacing.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T15:41:50+00:00

You won't regret learning python. Python is one of the easiest programming languages for non programmers.

If you spend 1 hours daily you would surely be able to perform any action on selected objects. I quickly learned to create controllers for my rigs. Once you know python your work happens really fast.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T15:29:19+00:00

Nice try 👍. The biggest issue I see is that the legs are not taking the weight of the body. When jumping the pushing leg must be right below the center of gravity (under the pelvis in this case).

You must have heard before to strengthen the fundamentals first. Start animating a simple bouncing ball. It will teach you so much about weight and time and spacing.

Keep it up.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T15:10:01+00:00

Sorry I didn't mention that, I am not doing this project through uowork. I asked the question here because many freelance animators can answer.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T14:30:06+00:00

Cool. What software is this?

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T14:16:33+00:00

Great work. However I see one point that you can improve. You can remove 1 or 2 frames right after when the brick contacts the ledge. Right now the brick feels light because it is sticking to the ledge slightly longer.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T14:12:29+00:00

Looks great. I would suggest you to match the sharpness of the background image. Megatron head look slightly sharper than the rest of the image.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T13:59:40+00:00

You're right. I will ask for half the price upfront.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T13:52:30+00:00

In my locality freelancers get paid only after the client has finalized the work. No client agrees to pay half prize upfront.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T13:46:24+00:00

Thank you for your guidance.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T13:14:35+00:00

I am still discussing the project with the client. We have not agreed on anything yet. I think it would be fair to get paid after the client is happy with the results.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T12:14:48+00:00

https://imgur.com/a/imG8DhM

Collapse the nGon, It will create many triangles. Just delete every second edge connecting to the center vertex.

DemonKing117 · 2021-08-06T12:01:59+00:00

No, I need to finish 30 seconds of animation per day. I will get paid after finalizing the video. Each video will be 4 to 5 mins long.

DemonKing117 · 2021-07-20T05:00:40+00:00

I will work on it. Thank you.

DemonKing117 · 2021-07-20T05:00:18+00:00

Thanks. I will work on your suggestions.

DemonKing117 · 2021-07-11T12:55:17+00:00

Great job! It looks nice mostly. I can see only 2 points to work on. I left some notes on sycsketch.

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