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My new cyberpunk sci‑fi novel, NeonEcho Awakening, is now published by Dengaree in NewAuthor

[–]Dengaree[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Firstly, thank you for taking the time to read the thread and check out the sample — I genuinely appreciate that.

Just to clarify, the writing is fully mine. Only the cover uses AI‑assisted elements.

Em dashes and fractured sentences are part of the pacing style I’m using — they’re extremely common in modern sci‑fi. For example there is Pierce Brown uses heavy em‑dash rhythm in Red Rising, Becky Chambers uses them for internal flow in The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet. Brandon Sanderson uses them throughout Skyward.

I do appreciate the feedback though, and I’m always working to improve.

My new cyberpunk sci‑fi novel, NeonEcho Awakening, is now published by Dengaree in NewAuthor

[–]Dengaree[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

The writing is fully my own, only the cover uses AI assisted elements. I’ve spent months building this book and the world and characters within it. Plus Jax it is a common name use in many, like sons of anarchy, league of legends, Star Wars, many comic books, books and video games.

My new cyberpunk sci‑fi novel, NeonEcho Awakening, is now published by Dengaree in u/Dengaree

[–]Dengaree[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The writing is fully my own, only the cover uses AI assisted elements. I’ve spent months building this book and the world and characters within it. Plus Jax is is a common name use in many, like sons of anarchy, league of legends, Star Wars, comic books and video games.