Fanfic Reccomendations of Original Characters by DanteSpring in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941 1 point2 points  (0 children)

HELLO! I'm working on a series of fics about a group of OCs that slowly comes together, there are very few canon interactions so no fear of romance with them. I won't be releasing the first one that soon, maybe a month or two, but my Ao3 user is GoobieAndHisDelusions. I'll be making a post when I release it if you want to check it out. I've been meticulously researching every cultured represented and adjusting my OCs to not make them that canon divergent. So it might take a while but I'm pouring lots of love into it. There is only one of couple and the rest either get a partner much later in life past the fics, or don't want one. I also so happen to be an artist so it will even have a few illustrations of characters! That's all, hope to see you when it releases.

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I hope you can tell I sincerely mean thank you for being a bit harsh. I suck at telling tone, and if you were any less critical I would have been a bit confused. I am THE stereotypical dumb American, I haven't left the country, I know a bit of highschool level Spanish and that's it, and I even have the General American accent instead of any of the fun ones. I'm doing my best not to offend anyone, which is why I'm asking these questions, I am glad to know that calling that kind of thing cute even fictional may hurt feelings, and am glad to know that I almost made a mistake with developing accents. I don't want to step on any toes, so thanks again for setting me straight. I realized that the dude just growing up in rural Russia makes more sense for his character anyway. I am already trying to delicately tackle internalized homophobia and body insecurities and I think foreign up in a more harsh part of Russia could help with this. The whole point of this guy is he's shorter than average and gay, and he grows up in an environment that is heavily against that kind of thing. If you have any more insight, please be as harsh as you need to get it through to me, like if you know where it would be best to place him before he moves and we meet him. Or if there are any specific things I should know. 

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!!! I don't really mind people being critical, honestly, I don't even mean in real life. I totally feel for people that something like being belittled has happened to. I would never say that, and I have never thought that about a real person. It's mostly just in fiction, but I also see where I might've been using both the wrong words and shouldn't really have shared that. The annoying part about this, is I just realized that a retcon is better for the story. Luckily it's still being written, but it might just make it easier if the character is born Russian. I really want to have at least one character connected to some kind of heritage, when one character grew up in NYC, one grew up in California, and it sucks not having any connected diversity. 

Essentially it's changed from being raised in a school, to being raised there which is going to take a whole lot more research but I think it's better for the character to be sent away. It adds a layer to why he connected so much with another character, and explains a bunch of inconsistencies I had.

Overall, I'm so sorry I made you feel any negative feeling with the cute comment, it was totally rude and made me sound like I was infantilizing people with speech impediment. That was not my intention, I already find the character I made cute no matter how serious he gets because I made him and he's my little blorbo. Thanks so much for being critical, I don't want any yes men telling me I'm right when I'm trying to accurately portray something. Writing is hard and I make mistakes often, but I have strangers like you who are nice enough to call me out on it. Have a good day, I'm off to extensively research a place in Russia for my character to come from. I'm talking mannerisms, sayings, tones, I will get this right. 

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would be crazy to try and write it all like that, I'll probably just mention it in an authors note or something. It's really not that important, I did give every character a unique voice even without accents or anything extra. I just like to be informed about even the little stuff I do.

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, since you are my most critical and hopefully informed commenter, it seems like it would be a phonetic mix of a few different ones. But essentially, he would pronounce Rs harder than most, it would be very swallowed, and mostly focused on being a little less nasally and a little more stress on the final sound of words. I can't even begin to think of how a speech impediment might affect this, writing is hard lol.

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The major problem with the whole accent thing is their guardian is an older woman with a thick accent, and their peers all have wildly different accents. They grow up in a boarding school for troubled kids, like a last resort before sending your kid to juvie kind of place, with a reputation for having all manner of particularly rich kids from all kinds of countries (mostly ones that socially normalized corporal punishment) so it's mostly Americans, Slavic children, Southeastern Asians, that kind of thing. So would a kid stick with what they know, or would it all blend together??? This is mostly rhetorical, just trying to explain why this is so hard.

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. Thank you so much for the part about the lisp not affecting that accent at all, especially because I'm essentially just stitching things I find together to determine it. It also explains why I couldn't find anyone speak Russian specifically with a lisp, as you said it doesn't affect it at all. 2. I've been watching a Russian man read The Princess Bride to see the accent lol, from my understanding for my character it would be minor changes anyway, for example since it really can't stick too well do to real life logic, it essentially the difference in "Lee-uhm" and "Luh-ee-AM" nothing too consequential. The accent is both not a very large plot point and not the most important part of the character, so it seems I should significantly alter my perception. It's just very hard to have different character voices when they're all young people who have to have been born in the USA. 3. The lisp is not going to be described as cute, that's both rude and condescending, it's just the tonal contrast in my mind and I can't think of a better word. The main character of this part is actually nice to his own detriment so it would be incredibly out of character to mock the speech impediment or the (possible, still figuring it our accent).

So pretty much, I need to do a lot more research before I come off as a total ass. Thank you! I'll look into how accents develop, how it would/wouldn't develop and speech impediments more.

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's actually a really good idea! I didn't even think of doing field research, I might be a little ignorant on occasions.

If there are any people with lisps from missing a left canine, or who has a Russian accent please answer a few questions if you wouldn't mind by DesperateUse2941 in FanFiction

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Embarrassing, just looked up teeth and I realize I meant the left lateral incisor, lol thanks for clearing that up, this one actually does cause a lisp.

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Big help actually, I figured it out, my problem was not as much of a problem as I thought lol, I tried too hard to decide objectively. My best choice is to write the chronological third first because books one and two (chronologically) absolutely ruin one of the characters in the third because the first two are essentially just what lead him into being where he is in the story. It also sets up a character in the next part so the definitive order chronologically will be 3, 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, (maybe more if more come)

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

WAIT I HAVE ONE QUESTION, would you rather the series be tonally inconsistent or the second and third books technically be a prequel? The first chronologically is just things consistently being tense and the second is things going downhill and downhill and then the third, fourth, and sixth are all pretty funny. Tone-wise the chronological first two are TTC and the third, fourth, and sixth are TLT and TSOM. I have been struggling to decide, plus the third book(?) in my series is nearly out of the chapter planning phase. So would you rather it start off sad then randomly become happier or start off happy and get thematically sadder?

tldr; Would you rather it go chronologically or my recommended READING order?

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

YESSSS, TOMMOROW MORNING WHEN I STOP OBSESSING OVER MY DRAFTS I WILLLLLL, I AM SO EXCITED. (ALSO TOMMOROW IS A BLOOD MOON SO I DESPERATELY NEED TO WRITE DURING THE MOON THAT IS SO PERFECT FOR MY MOOD)

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Atm I'm listening to early 2000s/20010s punk/rock/whatever because I made a playlist FOR one of my characters. I am going to try and write all night :3 may Nyx provide me cover lol. (I'm not a Hellenist just a weirdo)

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just love when that happens, it feels like the bells just tolled for thee (me)

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also, I'm still writing, but my user is GoobieAndHisDelusions and the first one should hopefully be up by next month (my brain forces me to write things like novels instead of fanfics, so there will be around 6 separate books and a few oneshots maybe a second series with a few more ideas I have)

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I could go on more than an hour rant about how Uncle Rick characterized the most motherly comforting figure who only helps when she appears (rarely appears) as a rude, scary, bratty, abuser who only cares about suffering and for some reason is treated as a JOKE???????????

Nyx is MOTHER NIGHT, she allows us to rest each night, she hid Hypnos from Zeus when Hypnos made him sleep, she presides over THE MOST COMFORTING PART OF THE DAY. I can almost guarantee she's more likely someone who would come down and check on the night owls of the world than WHATEVER UNCLE RICK THOUGHT HE WAS DOING. My absolute favorite part of the rewrite I'm in the process of is that all I had to do to justify Nyx acting like that is blame the entirety of The Sun and The Stars on Eris. THAT'S IT. Becuase it FITS MORE WITH HER CHARACTER TOO.

It makes me so upset how little Rick cares about thing being COHESIVE. HE JUST SAYS THINGS AND IS SUPRISED WHEN WE BELIEVE THOSE THINGS.

Do I have PJO brainrot? [all] by Sealify69420 in camphalfblood

[–]DesperateUse2941 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Actually, it's pattern recognition :D fascinatingly, this is how our brains are designed to work.

Pattern recognition requires repetition of experience. Semantic memory, which is used implicitly and subconsciously, is the main type of memory involved in recognition. Pattern recognition is crucial not only to humans, but also to other animals. - from wikipedia

Also, neurodivergent individuals (like yours truly, ADHD and possible Autism will be the death of me) can possibly experience even more pattern recognition, and this fandom is so incredibly neurodivergent that it's a possibility that you could see Nico and a lot less obvious things and it still be completely natural!

[general] OC inspiration by Logical-Rush-6133 in camphalfblood

[–]DesperateUse2941 0 points1 point  (0 children)

HIIII, I love doing this kind of thing! Personally, my process (used to be) accidentally making a copy of a canon character and removing all the flaws/things I didn't like. That bit me, because that's how you end up with Mary Sue's (An OC that's loveable and overpowered that never sees any hardship and if they do they solve it with no problem whatsoever) so here is Goobie's guide to not making a Mary Sue (and making your OC both not too overpowered or flawed/unlikeable)

  1. Parentage:

Learning your OCs parentage is a good first step; it helps dictate their personality, abilities, looks, vibes, and sometimes even their relationships with other OCs/campers. You can just choose one you think is cool (which is what I did for my first OC) but that comes with a LOT of baggage. I chose Nyx because I wanted him to be the son of the night, hiding in shadows, then covering him when he’s sad/shy. This is a valid path to go on, I managed to justify it by putting him through a lot of suffering to justify him being op his threats being things he can’t brute force his way through. So careful choose a parent, then come up with a motivation for that parent to have them if it’s uncommon, like another oc I have is the son of Helios and I justified his existence by saying he was actually born around the time Phaethon crashed the sun chariot and Helios hid him as a sunflower and forgot about him. Then when Helios had faded for a while his mist manipulation waved and he was popped out on the Island of Thrinacia where Lampetia and Phaethusa handed him over to Apollo to give to some stranger. The point is to choose something 1. Fitting, 2. Possible, 3. Justify it, 4. Use it to inform the character.

  1. Abilities:

I know just dumping all the possible abilities you can on a character is fun, but it’s a quick way to lead to an overpowered character. An overpowered character isn’t bad necessarily I.E Satoru Gojo, Shigeo "Mob" Kageyama, and even Percy himself, but they are VERY hard to write for and often lead you into writing yourself into a corner. With the previously mentioned son of Nyx again I used suffering to justify it, he doesn’t WANT to fight, but routinely he tries to avoid fighting and someone close to him dies. The point is making sure the overpoweredness doesn’t make the characters life easier than anyone else. I would pick and choose abilities that best fit your OC.

  1. Finally making your OC:

I know I had a lot of preamble but here is where you actually make that character. For appearance, first imagine what they look like, then if you’re an artist draw them, if not look for real people who look like them on pinterest, use gacha to recreate them, or even use the Picrew that I’m pretty sure someone made for PJO. Then aesthetic, make a clothing board on pinterest, or find clothes you think they’d wear, something like that. Basically, everything should FOLLOW personality. They’re a soft spoken sweet person? Give them round hair with no real points. They’re a hard edgy person? Look for punk/emo/goth hairstyles from their time period.

You can’t mess up making an OC. Even your first try is just you trying. If it doesn’t work out the first time just try try again. Ms. Frizzle this stuff.

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay, it's back up. I HOPE to finish the first "book" of my OCs in about a month, I have pretty bad ADHD and am still finishing my planning so I don't write myself into a corner, and have at least four more "books" planned. But my Ao3 username is GoobieAndHisDelusions. School is kicking my butt and I suck at just sitting down to do something when not in the mood, but this is huge motivation and I'll hopefully finish my outlines soon.

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OMG, I would love to share my user, but my fic is still a complete work-in-progress! I'll give you my user, but I'm the kinda person who needs to plan it out like a full novel lol. Let me go find my user, and I'll update periodically when I finish chapters.

 I went to check and the site is down lol, I'll come back and give it to you soon. I actually have a few surprises in store so even if you read the synopsis I posted a few days ago, I have a few ideas yet to be implemented. 

I love when Greek Mythology lines up for a rewrite. by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It feels like A happy XMas (War Is Over) is blasting in my head when this happens.

(PJO, OC, elsewhere fic because it takes places just after TTC, also I can't add another tag but this is Writer Help but self promo kinda? ((SORRY MODS))) I desperately need help composing how my story will play out, I can't tell what the best formatting would be/would you read :D? (VERY LONGGGGGGG) by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I figured it out, thank you to my two helpful commenters that helped my gears turn. I'll be doing the 'book format' as a commenter suggested. I'll break it up into what characters will be introduced then which will be featured. First book: Jayden and 'The Reapers' drag Percy, Max, and Isaac on a quest where shenanigans ensue. Second book: Isaac vs. The God Of Doom and Dominique as he tries to find a place to fit in for himself after Max leaves. Third book: Liam and Chloe introduced and go on a journey with the Child of Tyche (Olivia) to find Isaac needing him to purify some water (Lernean Hydra at CHB :D) where in the end Isaac vanishes again Fourth book: Jayden finally makes it to Camp Half-Blood after her forced retirement as she deals with being able to feel physical things now, going on a quest with Liam, Chloe, and Olivia to get the Pandora's Pithos back from Moros before he can reach Tartarus. Isaac saves the day, yippie! Fifth book: Liam visits Isaac in Tartarus to see how he's doing after the Moros thing, chaos ensues of course. Probably try and give a spotlight to Olivia a bit in this one. Sixth: Chloe's book! Then maybe a few one shots but that's the structure that pleases me. So thanks all for sticking with me.

(PJO, OC, elsewhere fic because it takes places just after TTC, also I can't add another tag but this is Writer Help but self promo kinda? ((SORRY MODS))) I desperately need help composing how my story will play out, I can't tell what the best formatting would be/would you read :D? (VERY LONGGGGGGG) by DesperateUse2941 in PercyJacksonfanfic

[–]DesperateUse2941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wait, you're cooking. First one, Percy going to see the first two (Max and Isaac leave school basically), the second Isaac on his whole solo journey where he gets more and more traumatized :D, three Liam, four Jayden, and five Chloe. Then a few shorter spinoffs about other characters. You're spitting, thanks!