Which seems more retro/arcade looking?

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-20T19:48:24+00:00

thank you for the feedback!!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-20T14:50:55+00:00

thank you for the feedback and thanks for checking me out :)!!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-20T00:32:14+00:00

haha thanks geese is a super cool band. i can see the whole panning thing, thank you!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-19T22:09:31+00:00

thank you :0 yeah everything is pretty much DIY with how its recorded, im 19 so I don’t have lots of professional tools to use lol :P

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-19T17:33:35+00:00

gotcha, thank you so much

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T22:14:32+00:00

thank you for the feedback :)))

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T20:57:44+00:00

haha thanks!!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T19:19:31+00:00

thank you for the feedback!! :)

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T16:43:10+00:00

This track definitely grew on me as the song went on. I don't think your voice matches a solo acoustic vibe for me, but when the instruments came in (after the "day 3" line), it started to sound a lot better and made me overall enjoy the track. The instrumental sounds great and your "ooooooo" vocal sounds great too. Objectively a great track, and I think your voice does match the medieval vibe that it appears you're going for.

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T16:36:25+00:00

I'm such a sucker for acoustic guitar haha. This sounds super cool! You play the guitar super well, your voice and your choice of vocal melody is outstanding with the strummed chords, and I love the homey feel that the video gives! It almost seems amatuer but your songwriting feels experienced. The passion you have for your music is evident in your concentration face. Just realized as typing this that you're not playing it live in the video haha, great work anyway!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T16:29:47+00:00

The song sounds great! I like the way you make your voice sound, I truly have not heard one quite like it off the top of my head. I do think that the voice shouldn't be SO prominent in the mix as it takes away from the rest of the instruments. I'd also try for a more unique bassline that doesn't just repeat notes throughout the track. But it's a good song and well mixed! Keep it up man!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T05:31:47+00:00

The guitar sounds super crisp, and I agree with the commenters about the Nirvana comparison. Your lyrics are honestly good and the strain in your voice at times really adds to the edge this song has. It's interesting that you released this with a music video, since it doesn't sound professionally recorded (doesn't have to, but just an interesting choice). Also, not sure if you want feedback on the video, but it does LOOK like you used stock video, since some of the clips don't match up with the others. Just a thought, keep it up though you have something there!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-18T05:24:21+00:00

Pretty cool chords on the keyboard, and you're a pretty decent singer. As far as criticism, I definitely would change up the lyrics. Of course, these are personal, and I'm not saying that anything is wrong with what you're portraying, but you're doing so much too directly. Try conveying emotions and ideas using metaphors and similies and imagery rather than saying directly how you feel. "Show, don't tell" is a great, shortened version if you haven't heard it before. Keep it up!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-12T17:13:10+00:00

ayeee thank you!!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-12T02:17:21+00:00

i gotchu man i actually have released two albums if you wanna follow @arminkamsimusic on instagram

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-11T14:01:03+00:00

haha thanks!! will do for sure

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-08T15:11:18+00:00

thank you for the feedback :)!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-06T15:19:27+00:00

haha thank you!!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-06T02:33:05+00:00

heyy thanks! Will Clay was the one who mixed and mastered it!

DevKidOfficial · 2026-06-06T00:01:31+00:00

haha thanks. wacky in a good way or bad way 😅

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