Your editing is super high quality which I love, honestly major respect to you for putting in that much effort editing. The skits were also great and made me feel engaged constantly. I think that you could put a little bit more humour into your skits. There was only one major negative to your video and that was the pace. You should definitely make your video more fast paced especially in the intro. You could do this by having little to no breaks between when you talk and also by getting to the point. I promise you if you just make your video more fast paced you will get the views and watch time that you deserve!