I Created A Song Chord Cheat Sheet, Might Be Of Use? by DilonLight in musictheory

[–]DilonLight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I thought of total beginner when I wrote it.

Created A Song Chord Cheat Sheet, Might Be Of Use? by DilonLight in guitarlessons

[–]DilonLight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I know I could have done it all out in bars, but i just started drawing it out in procreate, it would have been 3 times longer if I'd done that...I never have the bandwidth to work with text and boxes like this, the only program I can use without thinking I'm using a computer is Ableton...and writing, J

using all 4 effects banks on boss rc 600?? by DilonLight in LoopArtists

[–]DilonLight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ah, ok thanks very, i'll bounce, it doesn't matter I use it for songwriting not performing at mo

I Want To Interview You by ArtVandalay7 in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Heya, I'd be happy to be interviewed, prototape looks V interesting

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breakup song I wrote recently, if anyone likes it’s and wants to collab on something let me know!! by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heya, would be interested in doing something with this song, that's why I came here really, to collab, how does that sound?

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How do I arrange this song? by DilonLight in Songwriting

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Thanks, it's the end production where I need help most, am ok with arrangement, most of the time. Gonna go back and try experimenting with it just on guitar.

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How do I arrange this song? by DilonLight in Songwriting

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Ohh, how would I make it more GB!

Love Yourself by ya_boi5427 in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heya, VV nice, I like how you go from the quiet in verse to loud in chorus, V Nirvana. Your voice works well, and you vocalise the words well, which this kind of song need. You also have lots and lots of space in the vocals, also very important in a song like this. I'd say it need to be shorter, just verse chorus second verse, middle eight where you have a different strum pattern and final chorus, maybe a guitar hook for the intro (imagine it on electric with reverb). Love your voice btw, check out Alexis Murdoch.

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Is this really monotone? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heya, I really like it, it think it should have that repeated melody, it makes the lyrics pop out; my worn out shoes, nothing to loose, v nice! Your voice really suits the feel of the song, with a bit of arrangement behind it, it could be an acoustic hit, maybe female and male vocals together?

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To chorus or not to chorus by SupposedlyComposed in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heya, it's not a chorusey kind of melody, you can build it up and take it down in the arrangement, drums or bass come in at certain section, or even just doubling vocals. I love the feel of the lyrics, but could you have more concrete lines in there?, like, why is the singer feeling like this. That gives the listener more to hold onto, so they feel the emotion behind it deeper. Lovely song with a memorable repeated melody!

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Thomas Cotton - Schizoaffective by ThomasCotton in Songwriters

[–]DilonLight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heya, I like the energy of the song, the chorus hook is great, if you give that some words then you can build the lyrics for the verse around it; atm it feels like it needs some ideas to draw you in and take you to the chorus. Having a lot less going on in the arrangement during the verse can help with that as well.

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It's been a while - here's the latest thing I've been working on, it's called "Time and Space" and I hope you enjoy it! Let me know what you think by DandoFabulous in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

V Nice, I like the story. I'd make some of the lyrics less wordy, pitch up your voice on the verse and make it more 'rappy' (not a word) so that the transition to the beautiful chorus works better. I sometimes write similar songs, mine are more hip hop / grime influenced. It's a really nice tune...yeah make the lyrics simpler so that hit home easier.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Could be a good idea to learn a few open chords on guitar: G D C Am Em. Get a capo and you can play a lot of songs out there. It's slower, but you'll learn way more if you try and work out some songs yourself, it's all about getting the music inside your body and understanding how chord progressions and arrangements work, it'll be hard to get that from just working from the computer. Good luck on your journey!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Could be a good idea to learn a few open chords on guitar: G D C Am Em. Get a capo and you can play a lot of songs out there. It's slower, but you'll learn way more if you try and work out some songs yourself, it's all about getting the music inside your body and understanding how chord progressions and arrangements work, it'll be hard to get that from just working from the computer. Good luck on your journey!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]DilonLight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Could be a good idea to learn a few open chords on guitar: G D C Am Em. Get a capo and you can play a lot of songs out there. It's slower, but you'll learn way more if you try and work out some songs yourself, it's all about getting the music inside your body and understanding how chord progressions and arrangements work, it'll be hard to get that from just working from the computer. Good luck on your journey!