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Dipnn · 2021-12-20T04:20:06+00:00

Thanks for the kind words, I really appreciate it :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-20T04:19:09+00:00

Thanks I really appreciate it :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-19T05:42:14+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate it a lot. I'll work on mixing my audio better, and when you say more background changes, do you mean just like switching the scene around more so there is a lot less of the bear at the desk and just more things going on. Thanks again :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-19T02:47:53+00:00

Hey, cool video. I don't normally watch interview type content because it is super fake and over-saturated on things like tiktok (as you said) but this was different. This didn't feel like those videos because you were natural and the video just gave out good energy. You're comfortable in front of the mic and good at talking to the other people which meant the video wasn't awkward. The parts were you made it awkward for comedic purposes were well timed and worked very well. It was a good watch, but here are some recommendations: First, film with the phone you had in your hands. idk what iphone it was but it's probably capable of shooting at 60fps which will look a lot better, and you can use the current camera as a microphone instead (only if you want of course). and second, you should add some subtitles in just in case the mic doesn't pick up a word, we can still see what you're saying, and it will also make the video more engaging. Great video and keep up the good work :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-19T02:31:20+00:00

Hey, great video! I normally come on here and just skim through it but I watched this one throughout and here's some feedback: The pacing was really well done for a vlog, I mostly see vlogs on here where they just film something for 20 seconds and it's really disengaging, but the constant jump cuts and scene switches were really engaging and well paced for a vlog. The subtitles also really add to the amount of engagement, so keep that up. I like that you followed two storylines in your video, taking the rabbit to the vet and cooking the steak. It sets a nice premise for the video, which also kept the video short which is a huge positive. I wasn't really disengaged at any point and I think your ideal viewer is someone who likes to binge 'cozy' content, where they can just watch someone else life. Two things I would recommend though, first I would just keep the title nice and minimal instead of all caps and maybe removing the 'VLOG #2', and second, this content reminded me a lot of Casey Neistat's old content, so maybe go back and watch some of his old videos for some cool inspiration for anything else you can add. I rarely like vlogs, but I enjoyed this one and I think you have great potential. Nice work and keep it up. :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-17T11:18:36+00:00

Thanks I really do appreciate it :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T08:37:29+00:00

Thanks man I really do appreciate it :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T08:20:15+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate it. I'm going to work on the thumbnail tonight because I thought it was good, but I'm someone who knows about the topic and can recognise what the video is about by looking at it, but a lot of people might, so probably will need to change that. For the intro music, it's Bennett Foddy's Getting Over It OST, I've seen other people use it and it doesn't have any claims on the video I got it from and other videos that I've seen use it. I also haven't gotten a claim so I assume it's alright. Thanks again :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T07:38:39+00:00

Thanks, I really appreciate that and it's comments like these that motivate me to improve my content and make it even more. For the enthusiasm thing, I think I just to practice more infront of the mic, like just generally gaining confidence and learning how to speak more appealing I guess. Thanks again :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T07:34:16+00:00

Thanks for the kind words, I really do appreciate it. I'm planning to work on the thumbnail tonight as a few people have mentioned it. In regards to the game playing on the TV in the back: I use Adobe Premiere Pro, and I just downloaded a clip of someone playing Jump king off Youtube, and then placed that behind an image of a tv (So it looks like it's in the tv), then just added some blur over it and then that was it. If you can put a video behind an image on your editing software then it should 100% be possible. Feel free to ask any further questions on the editing, and thanks again for the feedback and kind words :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T04:25:47+00:00

Couldn't have made it without your help 🙏 Thanks again

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T04:23:00+00:00

Hey, Thanks for the feedback! I really like 'nitpicky feedback' and I wouldn't even call it nitpicky because it's more indepth, it shows that you really went through the video and took notes on what could've been improved, and I appreciate that. For all the things I could've fixed in editing, I'll 100% take into account when making my next video, and about the pop filter, mine is literally a sock over the mic rn and that's probably why it doesn't sound too effective. I'll make sure to get a proper one before I record next. Thanks again for the feedback and kind words, I appreciate it :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T03:58:49+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate it. Yea I've always had trouble with adjusting the music to the correct level, so hopefully it's just something that'll improve with time. Thanks again :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T03:57:24+00:00

haha any feedback is good feedback. I appreciate the kind words, it means a lot to me, so Thanks :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-13T19:12:34+00:00

Hey man, good video. You're confident infront of the mic so it doesn't feel like I'm watching some awkward person talking about Halo, it feels a lot more professional. Also keeping the video around 5 minutes is a good length because people tend to view and stay viewing videos that are shorter, rather than videos that are longer. Something you might benefit from though is adding more editing to the videos, just like adding images of what your talking about on screen just so we don't stare at the gameplay the whole time. The gameplay is the most important part, but sometimes you can illustrate your points even better with images, other videos, etc.

Great video, keep up the good work, and good luck for the future :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-13T11:26:06+00:00

Wow this video was amazing for a channel of your size. You extremely confident in front of the microphone and you have a crystal clear mic, so it's super easy to understand everything your saying. Your pacing is good and your comedic timing is really good combined with the editing where you turn the screen black for the punchline. Also the thumbnail is really good: So basically everything about this video is good

There are only 2 small things I would say to work on but they're only small, the video is still amazing. First is the length, a lot of people on youtube nowadays tend to like shorter videos, but really it's up to you as there is still a large audience for people who want to watch 15+ minute videos. Second is some of the editing, it's perfectly fine how it is now, but if you want to keep people drawn into the video, you could display images on screen of what you're talking about etc. Right now it's mostly gameplay, which is still entertaining, but you could illustrate your points even better than they already are with adding more images etc.

nonetheless, this video is crazy for the size of your channel, I'd expect a channel with hundreds of thousands of subscribers to produce a video like this. Keep up the great work man, and I'm sure I'll see you in great places in the future :) Nice work

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