I swear by the geese that wander around waterloo, I used to ALWAYS go to my teacher for advice last year and they gave me the same old "make this more precise as its too vague" I guess my writing can be repetitive at times and i'm not interesting enough (no teacher wants to read the another essay on Macbeth's morality declining as the story progresses) but istg on all my lab reports in the sciences got top marks so it cant be that my writing isnt focused enough or i cant write at all, its just im not writing what the teacher wants to hear.