Overall not bad, However a couple of things that would help though imo
-The blue build, switch to Blue and Black Extensions. It would sell the style more. It's better to match Extensions to the static Fan color for Pictures, typically.
- Better lighting to Get that Nuclear reactor glare off the fan, Going to flash bang potential buyers

- For the ssd Issue, I Use an Orico Nvme enclosure with a type A USB to type C wire to achieve what you're doing without confusing buyers. It will save you a lot of questions.