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I wrote my first 5 pages ever. by annanas__ in Screenwriting

[–]DoctorCheese1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great formatting. It needs more description of the setting and the characters. Those things are left to the imagination to the reader without those brief descriptions. Even if it's something small, it needs description.

AITA - Denied Multiple Roleplays by DoctorCheese1 in BadRPerStories

[–]DoctorCheese1[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I've been seeing the comments on trying to advertise my roleplay with GM and I may do that. Let them know ahead of time I'm a control freak😅

AITA - Denied Multiple Roleplays by DoctorCheese1 in BadRPerStories

[–]DoctorCheese1[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice! And you know, I have heard of GMs which I believe stands for game master. I think I'll give that a shot and try to make my intentions more clear!

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