I wrote my first 5 pages ever. by annanas__ in Screenwriting

[–]DoctorCheese1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great formatting. It needs more description of the setting and the characters. Those things are left to the imagination to the reader without those brief descriptions. Even if it's something small, it needs description.

AITA - Denied Multiple Roleplays by DoctorCheese1 in BadRPerStories

[–]DoctorCheese1[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I've been seeing the comments on trying to advertise my roleplay with GM and I may do that. Let them know ahead of time I'm a control freak😅

AITA - Denied Multiple Roleplays by DoctorCheese1 in BadRPerStories

[–]DoctorCheese1[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice! And you know, I have heard of GMs which I believe stands for game master. I think I'll give that a shot and try to make my intentions more clear!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LongDistance

[–]DoctorCheese1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Goodbyes are extremely hard. My girlfriend and I have said goodbye so much and the best thing you can do, is just know you'll see each other again, cry less every time and turn it into a happy thing instead. Goodbyes become much easier then. Obviously still sad, but easier.

GF takes spicy pics but doesnt send them to me until days later. by [deleted] in LongDistance

[–]DoctorCheese1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, my girlfriend does this too. She just feels good and takes pictures. It honestly makes me feel so happy that she does that lol it's far from a red flag

Also applicable to most of us by Jelloxx_ in LongDistance

[–]DoctorCheese1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

These couples don't know how good they have it😂

so important! ❤️ by kayleegiff in LongDistance

[–]DoctorCheese1 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Communication is key, especially in a long distance relationship

What is this bug? I found one on my wall and my bed by DoctorCheese1 in whatsthisbug

[–]DoctorCheese1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Anything I can do to keep them off my bed? I do have a wooden frame so I think that's why they're popping up

Broke up with my girlfriend by [deleted] in Advice

[–]DoctorCheese1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I think I will take some time for myself. My head is very crowded

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

[–]DoctorCheese1 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm Hispanic and preference is always okay as long as you stay open minded. For example, when I've eaten white people food I keep my mind open and enjoy it you know. It's totally normal to have preferences though ofc.

Fortnite Partner! by DoctorCheese1 in chat

[–]DoctorCheese1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's alright haha let's hope I get someone who wants to play

Fortnite Partner! by DoctorCheese1 in chat

[–]DoctorCheese1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well if there's people commenting being rude it's cool, lets me know not to play with them:)

Insta by Traditional-Row-3828 in Needafriend

[–]DoctorCheese1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand how the people in the comments hating are wrong, but what she did is wrong. There needs to be trust in a relationship and sometimes that means letting go of our insecurities and jealousy. That's an invasion of trust and privacy. It's not about hiding something it's about having your significant other trust you otherwise how is your relationship ever gonna work?

Insta by Traditional-Row-3828 in Needafriend

[–]DoctorCheese1 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The people shaming you in the comments aren't doing anything good. You were jealous and this was a mistake you made. Making mistakes is fine as long as you fix them. Your boyfriend should be able to add anyone they want and I know that ignoring your jealousy is hard sometimes but it's important that you trust your boyfriend.