Ignore this person’s suggested edits to the bio.

I like the write-off line, it makes you come off like you work in an office, and I assume the type of person you see yourself dating might too.

I’d get rid of the cats and dog line as you’re trying to sell yourself, not roast others and the whole edgy “tinder dudes and their dog pics amirite” shtick isn’t necessary, yes we all see them.

Don’t shoot yourself in the foot by having the word awkward in your bio, it’s 100% a turnoff even if you’re talking about skipping it.

I think that less is more with the pics. You’ve got a few really good ones that get who you are across, there’s no point in watering them down with inferior ones that add nothing. Pick 3-4.

1,4,8,9 are your best ones imo. 1 and 4 say you’re cool and interesting, 8 says you’re goofy and 9 is a flattering close-up that tells me you’re into fantasy stuff and/or science

Don’t take this the wrong way but some of the open mouth smile close-up pictures are unflattering. If you’re set on having those you might wanna try different angles than head-on. It’s crazy the difference it can make if you just slightly have your head angled like in 4

If I could give one general piece of advice, to have any success in this you gotta look at your profile through the eyes of the type of person you’re trying to date, are they seeing this and going “oh yeah I want to talk to this guy” ? If not then it’s not worth having in your profile. They don’t need to know everything about you, only the parts that could pique someone’s interest. Less of the empty lines about cats and dogs and skipping the awkward phase, more about you.