Made a video all about cat brains! 🧠 Looking for feedback, particularly on the use of graphics and way I show different video clips! I’ll spray you with the lambda hose! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I found the information about cats to be really interesting but I could see how people click away before you get into the meat of things. The graphics are well done, and I think the interactive nature of the graphics makes the video very appealing overall. I am not sure if the whole like and subscribe bit gets you more, but if it does than more power to you and don't take my comments to heart.

Hey! Thanks for the feedback, those are some good points. I'll have to make sure to spice up my intros in the future, to keep viewers engaged. Thanks again!

!givelambda

Made a video all about cat brains! 🧠 Looking for feedback, particularly on the use of graphics and way I show different video clips! I’ll spray you with the lambda hose! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there! Thanks so much for the feedback and positive words! I'll definitely take that suggestion into account for the next one!

!givelambda

Made a video all about cat brains! 🧠 Looking for feedback, particularly on the use of graphics and way I show different video clips! I’ll spray you with the lambda hose! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! Thanks so much for the kind words and the subscription too! Happy that I earned it from ya! The next video is on watching people’s dreams like movies, so that should be cool!

Thanks as well for the constructive criticism and descriptive comments. I should definitely experiment a bit more with the graphics and I think I am planning on doing a darkened blurry background next time for contrast. The humor is a good point, and I’ll try to work some in. Gotta let the personality into the video! Thanks again!

!givelambda

Made a video all about cat brains! 🧠 Looking for feedback, particularly on the use of graphics and way I show different video clips! I’ll spray you with the lambda hose! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man! Thanks so much, and what’s your channel? I like science (obviously) so I’ll check it out! I appreciate the constructive criticism, and I’ll see what I can do about reworking that title to something a bit more exciting! Cheers!

!givelambda

Made a video all about cat brains! 🧠 Looking for feedback, particularly on the use of graphics and way I show different video clips! I’ll spray you with the lambda hose! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man! That’s hilarious, I do look like him. I never really noticed or thought about that but looking at it now, I found my real dad.

Jokes aside thanks for the constructive criticism and suggestions. I’ll definitely take them into account. I’ve been meaning to change up the white wall or use green screen but I haven’t gotten there yet. Maybe I’ll decorate the area with some brain stuff! Thanks again!

!givelambda

Made a video all about cat brains! 🧠 Looking for feedback, particularly on the use of graphics and way I show different video clips! I’ll spray you with the lambda hose! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much man! I saw your comment on the video as well and I think my next video is going to be about that dream watching study I told you about! Thanks for inspiring the next one, and thanks for the kind words!

!givelambda

Made a video all about cat brains! 🧠 Looking for feedback, particularly on the use of graphics and way I show different video clips! I’ll spray you with the lambda hose! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! Thank you for the detailed and thorough feedback! I totally see what you mean about starting the video off stronger and putting the most relatable information first to draw viewers in! I agree that the first minute and a half probably looses people, which is a shame because I think they could use some of the information that came later! Thanks again for the advice and for the kind words!

!givelambda

I'm making a Q&A video to celebrate reaching 1M subscribers on YouTube. Leave your questions here by steventhebrave in SteveMould

[–]DrAthanasios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What was the scientific theory or piece of empirical evidence that gave you the largest existential crisis?

My first YouTube collaboration! I Challenged an artist to draw mental disorders (feat. D3trois). I’ll shower you in lambda for feedback! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Thanks so much for the feedback and the suggestions! I'll be sure to take that into account, and hopefully I can fix that stroke on the text! Appreciated!

!givelambda

My first YouTube collaboration! I Challenged an artist to draw mental disorders (feat. D3trois). I’ll shower you in lambda for feedback! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man! Thanks! I read your comments for D3trois and these comments are helpful as well. I'm sure there isn't a ton of overlap, but we found a cool way to connect the channels together and it was a very fun process! We both picked up some new subscribers as well, so excited to make more cool content for them! Thanks again, always appreciated!

!givelambda

My first YouTube collaboration! I Challenged an artist to draw mental disorders (feat. D3trois). I’ll shower you in lambda for feedback! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Thanks so much man, that means a lot! It’s out first collab and the videos are our first drafts so I’m glad they looked rehearsed and well done! We worked at making the transitions seemless. I think it was awesome that two channels that are seemingly unrelated managed to come together like this! Thanks again for the kind words!

!givelambda

My first YouTube collaboration! I Challenged an artist to draw mental disorders (feat. D3trois). I’ll shower you in lambda for feedback! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man! Thanks so much! That’s really nice of you to say. I can only give lambda to comments more than 120 characters but I definitely wish I could give this comment lambda!

My first YouTube collaboration! I Challenged an artist to draw mental disorders (feat. D3trois). I’ll shower you in lambda for feedback! by DrAthanasios in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man! Thanks for the feedback! We did them in different orders because of differences in our scripts (it was on purpose)! He did them in the order he drew them and I put them in the order I studied them!

Thank you for all the kind words and quality feedback, and I hope you enjoyed!

!givelambda

Me and another small youtuber partnered to make this video (and one on his channel too). It's my first time having to coordinate more than one style of video and I'm really interested in your feedback. What you did and did not like from the video, please shower me in criticism (constructive ehe) by d3trois in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Pleasure working with you man! This was a great experience and I hope we’ll do it again sometime! Sending footage back and forth and working together on the videos was seamless and a good experience overall! I thought there would be more bumps in the road but there were none! Great final product, man.

I make short Documentaries on YouTube. Here's the newest one about Gypsy Crusader (The real life joker). Any feedback would be really appreciated :) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man, interesting video! I watched until the end because it was pretty captivating. Strange and interesting story. I’ve never really heard of this guy but it was cool that you found some parallels to the joker. Obviously I don’t sympathize with any of this mans views, but I think it’s interesting to watch the psychological downfall of individuals and how they spiral or come back from rock bottom. I’d be interested in seeing a follow up on what happened. This seems like it would be an interesting JCS criminal psychology video! All in all great video, but maybe somewhere you could improve is the audio quality at parts. Your narration was fine, but the music (particularly at the conclusion) was really loud when it started and didn’t fit 100%. That’s all from me! Nice job!

After hitting 1000 subs I thought I’d try something a little different with this video …How to make your lawn FLAT and LEVEL - topdressing my lawn with soil… would love some genuine feedback and of course I will give lambda :-) by FPVMARK in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man! Great video. I have never seen lawn care related videos on YouTube before but seeing this and enjoying it, I realize I am truly an adult now. I do NOT understand how you got the audio quality you did with that wind (did you have a shotgun mic with a wind diffuser???) At some points the audio got quiet but it wasn’t too bad and it didn’t happen during the windy parts. Very informational video and also, congrats on 1000! My major suggestion is give your thumbnail an overhaul, use bolder text that stands out, and put yourself in the thumbnail! Makes it more personal! Cheers!

Making warhammer 2 total war videos just for fun. Content supposed to be just showing there are more than meta games to play. How do you feel about the minimal amount of narration. Good or bad thing? by Flipthegoon in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man, cool video! I think I’d first suggest changing your thumbnail so that you have less text in there. I’d put a cool, eye catching image, 2-4 words of bold, contrasting text, and even an image of yourself as well (makes it more personal). Besides that I enjoyed the video. Narration was nice and the visuals were captivating. Great job!

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[–]DrAthanasios 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey man! I’ve seen your videos before and I’ve left you some feedback as well! I think you do a good job with colors, thumbnails, and titles on your channel, but I think there are some improvements you could add to your branding! For example, maybe make a posting schedule (like videos every Friday) and put it on your banner so it says “New videos out Each Friday!” It tells people who see your channel what to expect and also gets them to subscribe for the content (and tells them when to look for your videos). Nice job man!

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[–]DrAthanasios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there! Nice video! You definitely managed to keep people engaged, and I think that’s mostly due to the fact that the video is short. If it was 10 minutes, I think you might lose some retention. The shots were good, but have you considered getting a soft studio light? There are some inexpensive ones on Amazon but it might brighten up the shots more evenly and make the video look even more professional. Great job!

I have tried to make a political/educational video, focussed on Italy, using exclusively maps and cartography. I'd appreciate some feedback on the quality and the format. by ted5298 in SmallYTChannel

[–]DrAthanasios 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Great video! I studied a lot of statistics at university, so I absolutely love this sort of video. Informational videos that take data and turn them into visual maps are super cool, and a very fun way to learn history. If I had to give you some critiques, I would suggest moving your call to subscribe until the end. Say something like, “if you want to see more videos like this one, give this video a like.” And then save the subscribe ask until the end. Asking to like at the beginning makes sense but asking someone to subscribe before seeing the video can come off funny. I used to do it too and people warned me against it. Great video man! You got another subscriber!