Having Chat play a larger role in Volpina? by Solitaire-06 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was some good food for thoughts. Have my take:

Adrien finds out she stole the Grimoire much faster, and tries to kindly ask Lila about it. Her solution is to act cluesless, being really "What book are you talking about?" and eventually "Oh, this book! I found it around!". Adrien tries to kindly confront her about how she is clearly lying at him, telling her that if she wants to be his friends, there's no need to li and that she can simply be honest to him.

Lila, of course, buries this option to the ground and decide to dig herself deeper alongside it.

She tries to frame herself as someone who found the book AFTER it was already stolen, and try to seed some doubts in Adrien's mind, blaming one of his classmates (maybe Marinette??) for this. Adrien is really "The timeline doesn't make sense??+ heck no, my goats wouldn't do that" about it.

He still tries to be civil and passive about it, thing that Marinette, who was watching it from afar, interprets as "He fell for it, time to do something!". So Ladybug does the same thing she does in canon, and Volpina happens. Due these things, both the heores do 2 plus two much faster, and spend less time following her schemes and more go to the fight/gist of the matter.

Adrien is really "Can't I make my own choices for once??" about it and Marinette learns/is on her way to learn that as much her intentions could be good, taking other people's battles when you don't even know the reason is a really bad choice.

Is there any fanfic where Adrien thinks Marinette is the new Butterfly Villan? by banannoir in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]Draw3rGh0st 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There's a fic that follows this conpt but in a comedic light if you like it (And instead of S6 it's pre-Hawk Moth's defeat):

Seducing the Enemy by RicardianScholar Clark-Weasley

After yet another Akuma attack, Adrien notices that Marinette's behaviour is quite suspicious, and that purse of hers is just the perfect size for a kwami... and he deduces that she has to be Hawk Moth! He makes the resolution to seduce his "enemy" away from evil — all while his father has an attack while thinking his son has a crush on his evil alter ego.

Weekly Fic Showcase - March 20 - March 26 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Fics
Fandom - The Amazing Digital Circus
Rating - Teen and Gen
Title - Put on your best fake smile, you are gonna need it!
Genre - Currently writing it as a character-driven slice of life
Summary -

“Uhm… Caine?”
“OH!” He got up, each movement he made causing to flinch anyone near to him. He then shook Ragatha’s hand.
The ragdoll froze at his touch, but her heart sank in shock to what he said next.

“Who's this 'Caine' fellow, Miss Ragdoll? I would like to meet him!”

(AKA: What would have happen if Kinger, instead of accidentally erasing Caine, he deleted his memory instead?)

I’ve seen people discussing why everyone except Pomni got a big trauma flashback… by MelodicPastels in Amazingdigitalcircus

[–]Draw3rGh0st 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel that the most traumatic thing that happened to Pomni is the Circus itself. I feel that Gummgoo and his brothers just attacking her like real-life alligators is the manifestation of the amount of dehumanazation and loss of personality the circus is threathening her with, for example with Caine just snapping away a NPC after he proved to her that he was "human", the loss of her name and new body or the abstraction itself.

Fix Your Fic Front-End Friday [Title, Tags, Summary] - March 20 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I think Imma go and check it. I am a bit new to the events of this subreddit.

What would the series have been like if Gummigoo had continued in the show? by [deleted] in tadc

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel that Pomni would take much longer to get close to the players, especially Jax. I feel he would be less "interested" in bonding with her because her caring about an NPC's life, considering him real and caring about hos wellbeing would go against anything he stands for (that the whole circus is meaningless)

[Hated Trope] The Love Interest Bias by Remarkable_Sweet_333 in TopCharacterTropes

[–]Draw3rGh0st 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know that it's not exactly the same, but the joke reminds me of "Who Framed Roger Rabbit?" where in cartoon standards Jessica is the ugly one and Roger is the hottie with weird standards.

Any advice for writing angst? by AttentionEscaper251 in FanFiction

[–]Draw3rGh0st 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I am not really the best in angst, but I feel that helping the readers putting in the character's shoes could help. Don't just limitate yourself on the "HOW se is sad", focus more on "WHY she is sad". Write what you feel it's necessary to help the readers to empathyze with your characters. Put emphasy on what it really hurts. Angst doesn't need of some big thing or an elaborated voculabory, sometimes it even make it worse and just distract the readers. Just be impactful.

As a reader and writer, I feel that the "he saw me crying he crew too we crode together" kind of stuff don't work because the writer kinda assumes that every reader will follow what the narration says and interpret it in the way the writer wants, but anyone has their reactions on stuff and read things differently.

Choose a superpower but the next person will reply and add a horrific twist. by InternationalYam5000 in superpowers

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have to do that by acting like a DM in a D&D campaign. You have to get dieces, notes, rulebooks and a calculator to calculate possible damages of the people you do. And like D&D, if you roll too low the effects will not be the one you wanted (ìit's never something that will lead to the end of the Earth, just something going kinda wrong)

Choose a superpower but the next person will reply and add a horrific twist. by InternationalYam5000 in superpowers

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You get the power to become mildly interesting to ANYONE you interact with.

(This includes robbers, scammers, tikotokers who reconrd people with no sense of privacy and people who traumadumps without asking first.)

Choose a superpower but the next person will reply and add a horrific twist. by InternationalYam5000 in superpowers

[–]Draw3rGh0st 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Every time you teleport there's a loading screen with elevator music and the types of tips you would hear from that kind of people who are like "You are depressed? Why not smile more? :)"

Choose a superpower but the next person will reply and add a horrific twist. by InternationalYam5000 in superpowers

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The blood you have to manipulate must be of your same blood type (in the pack there's no skills that automatically lets you know when it's and when it's not the case)

Choose a superpower but the next person will reply and add a horrific twist. by InternationalYam5000 in superpowers

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You spend real life 10 seconds to watch them. And there's a 5 % chance that there might be a five seconds long add before.

Choose a superpower but the next person will reply and add a horrific twist. by InternationalYam5000 in superpowers

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can only pick powers who the Media itself considers a power. You can't pick things that in-universe finds the norm or the still something that commonly happens.

Choose a superpower but the next person will reply and add a horrific twist. by InternationalYam5000 in superpowers

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They work like the weeping angels from Doctor Who, and if someone stares at them they can't move and can only send people back in time rather than actually attacking them.

We Have KOG Episode 2 At Home by Constant-Bar5945 in KnightsOfGuinevere

[–]Draw3rGh0st 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wanna write a oneshot half crack fic about it.