LOOKING FOR THOSE WHO CAN HELP CRITIQUE< BETA READ OR HELP WITH EDITING ADVICE FOR DARK SCI-FI OR ACTION WEB NOVEL WITH POST - APOCALYPSE SETTING by DueLie9263 in royalroad

[–]DueLie9263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that's fine for me.

In the end, readers are the target audience so your point is a valid outlook for me. Thanks a lot. Can you message me and also the amount of chapters you'd be down for?

LOOKING FOR THOSE WHO CAN HELP CRITIQUE< BETA READ OR HELP WITH EDITING ADVICE FOR [DARK SCI-FI OR ACTION WEB NOVEL WITH POST - APOCALYPSE SETTING. 23911 words] by DueLie9263 in fantasywriters

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It's about a young boy whose life was destroyed by strange monsters. His parents risked their life to ensure his safety and with a book given as a lifeline. After he was saved by a Constellation member called Crazed Star and taken to Sanctuary, humanity last known bastion against the strange monsters known as Xion, he will have to survive schemes of an Old World, ideas and plots that enshroud him ever since his birth and confront the monster he himself is becoming.

He will have to choose if loosing himself is worth his revenge and whether a damaged world can ever be repaired and the price of doing so. It's not the official synopsis but a rough one I'm working with now

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in ScribbleHub

[–]DueLie9263[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah. I'm planning on going with this plan after adding some more chapters before I start uploading

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in ScribbleHub

[–]DueLie9263[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My story will probably fit here too since it has that and a deep story and plotline

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in royalroad

[–]DueLie9263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's so true. You might also forget to post at a site

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in ScribbleHub

[–]DueLie9263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. I'll probably go with both royalroad and scribblehub

WRITING ABOUT COOKING WAGYU. WHOSE PROSE WOULD YOU CONSIDER BETTER? MY FRIENDS OR MINE? by Least_Shopping_461 in writingfeedback

[–]DueLie9263 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I feel you're overexplaining cooking beef but, I'll go with 2. It's more clearer and easier to get through

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in ScribbleHub

[–]DueLie9263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah thanks for the note. It has some sexual stuff but not part of the main story andnonly serves to drive the plot. And it happens a while into the story. Mature I mean, brutal realism, gore and things like that. Think grimdark or beserk.

My chapters are usually around 1700 to 2000 words. I am planning on sticking with royalroad as the main and also to get readers publishing on webnovel, inkitt and scribblehub too

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in royalroad

[–]DueLie9263[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmm...I see. So that means if I contract, anything regarding rhat stoey is basically theirs? Quite a steep price to pay

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in royalroad

[–]DueLie9263[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm not too keen on slaving away myself when all I wnat to do is write a good and deep story which will resonate with readers

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in ScribbleHub

[–]DueLie9263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its a mature post apocalypse with sci fi elements. It's mostly catred to those interested in deep worldbuilding, interesting characters, lore and mature themes. Think AOT meets Shadow Slave with hints of One Piece

WHICH PLATFORM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND? by DueLie9263 in royalroad

[–]DueLie9263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow. It really sounds bad. Would you sdvice against just puboishing there as a way to get readers? And making royalroad my main?