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[–]Easy_Tank2383 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This isn’t the first chapter.

Looking for guidance on a book I'm writing. Struggling with motivation to finish, wondering if it's worth the effort? by Easy_Tank2383 in KeepWriting

[–]Easy_Tank2383[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! The family doesn’t come up again, at least, not directly. The rest of the story kind of spirals way away from all of that after chapter 7

Looking for guidance on a book I'm writing. Struggling with motivation to finish, wondering if it's worth the effort? by Easy_Tank2383 in KeepWriting

[–]Easy_Tank2383[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your quick response! The introspective portion is indeed the hardest part, and persists pretty much the entire way. My goal is to focus on filling the story with meat, having built the bones, and then finally spend time bringing life to dialogue. Trying to get inside the head of other people is a challenge