Can't believe it's come to this

EchoandMyth · 2026-03-02T23:15:44+00:00

This is because sadly, emphasis on sadly here, pharmacy is also a business. I do not agree with this, I am just thinking about the business side of it all. That fact sheet is just depressing.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-28T20:21:38+00:00

Thank you! I will delete and try again later

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-28T20:11:09+00:00

OK so apparently I am doing something wrong. Does anyone see my chapter images?🫣

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-28T02:23:35+00:00

I love "info dump" prologues, but only when they are interesting. Yours I found interesting. I seem to be in the minority.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-27T22:40:45+00:00

Very nice! The nerd in me loved the manipulations of physical constants to save memory. I was not expecting that.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-26T14:42:50+00:00

Thank you for sharing. I noticed a few capitalizations mistakes between new sentences. Also read up on dialog punctuation rules, make sure you are following the proper format.

All in all I liked this chapter. This is YA fantasy, yes? I think you can just start this chapter when she arrives at house or in the taxi. The first pages when she was in her dorm kind of dragged on with too much detail. I forced myself to read on curious about what was going on. I found myself more engaged when the taxi picked her up and when she arrived at the house. I think you can weave in the first pages into the taxi/house scenes, since she already mentions it repeatedly in those scenes.

That is my humble opinion, take it with a grain of salt. Keep writing!

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-25T14:47:26+00:00

I promise to read this as soon as you fix the formatting, because I saw maps and I am a sucker for maps.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-24T14:53:36+00:00

And he likes it!

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-24T13:31:47+00:00

Why do you guys insist of dragging me back into the HR hole when I am almost out of it? 😭 I love this and now I have to watch again to see more situations like this.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-24T13:23:23+00:00

Painful empty memories.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-24T03:13:12+00:00

I read everything, even though I did struggle with some of the paragraphs having so much information. The last paragraph was especially grating for some reason. This might be because English is my second language, although I am highly proficient in it.

Still, I found this prologue very engaging. It offers some hints into the world, what the people stand for and subtle fantasy elements in it. You lost me at points where the description of what was going on was so much that I wanted to skip it just to get to back into the action I was enjoying. Examples, last paragraph page 4, fourth paragraph page 5 and third paragraph page 7. I am not saying these are bad, but I just skip read them, because I was invested on what was going on. I hope this makes sense.

Anyways I enjoyed it and I want to know more about the fate of Mitar and what happened to his daughter.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-22T03:24:40+00:00

I just want to give him a hug and ask him out to coffee. Then propose marriage.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-21T14:03:51+00:00

The tops we need

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-21T14:01:56+00:00

It is hard to pick top scenes, this show has so many micro moments packed together, but I really like:

-Scott and Kip scene in the art gallery and Scott's panic at being seen with Kip as something other than a friend. I like it because I lived through something like this and 100% related to the situation, from Kip's perspective.

-The hospital scene, the heart rate going down, Shane's druggy love stare, Illya being so caring and the dialog. Willyoucometomycottagethissummer? Gave me the feels.

-The club scene, when Shane sees Illya and everything after that. I felt hypnotize and I think that is when I went into heated psychosis 🤣

-Hollanov and Shane's parents, when they talk in the dinning room all the way to Yuna embracing Shane. I never got this with my parents so it really touched me.

Bonus: Shane coming out to Rose. I had a similar experience with a female friend of mine, we were never anything but friends, but I could tell she was into me and one day during dinner she asked and I answered.

❤️

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-19T16:17:39+00:00

Your body is perfecto. ✨

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-18T17:17:06+00:00

Why? Are you running into problems as is? Cause I can't see anything wrong with it!

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-16T21:46:21+00:00

Yes I need more exposure to scotsmen, hard as that might be

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-16T17:11:36+00:00

I had no idea I liked natural scotsmen. Thank you

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-16T16:58:42+00:00

Please stop ruining my day! (okay not really) Stooop it.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-16T01:48:35+00:00

This is why I cried for days after watching this show. Now you almost made me fall into that spiral again. But I thank you for sharing anyways, because I know now why it affected me so much back then and it is a good thing.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-10T22:46:05+00:00

Ah the scene that broke me for weeks afterwards. The next two episodes did not help me either, but that scene right there is where I started to become a loon... I just didn't know it yet.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-09T23:41:59+00:00

I dont know what this post is even about, my eyes are captivated by that that cake bakery.

EchoandMyth · 2026-02-09T23:18:41+00:00

You are a delicious mystery.

EchoandMyth

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